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  • #16
    Loving these images Bobby. Love the color palette. I'm really digging your door texture and how you can see the subtle wood grain. I would have simply applied a white paint to the door out of laziness, but it's the subtle details that combine to make fantastic images. A couple things that stick out to me - the stove has 3 burners on and they draw unnecessary attention to themselves. Also, the ceiling fan seems a little small, though I'm sure it's the correct size. I don't know why, or that it would help anything, but I'd kinda like to see a bit of light spilling out from under the doors leading to adjacent rooms, unless the door in the kitchen view is the pantry. That little succulent garden is fantastic!
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    • #17
      Thanks! Typically, I have a running list of things I can do, to make images better, if I have to return to them. On this bucket list was correct mapping on the doors. Light under the doors, I like that. Maybe, I'll try to do that in post. The ceiling fan does look small. I'll have to check on that.

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      Last edited by glorybound; 10-12-2015, 01:44 PM.
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      • #18
        The bedroom.

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        • #19
          Originally posted by glorybound View Post
          The bedroom.

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          Looking good!
          ...but the floor looks a bit, uhhm "oversized sandpapery"
          Kind Regards,
          Morne

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          • #20
            That didn't turn out as I wanted. Any tip on carpet? I used a diffused color with a displacement.
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            • #21
              Keep the color, but maybe try a grass map as dispacement
              OR
              subdivide the floor into smaller blocks (maybe 1 feet by 1 feet) and stick a fine vrayfur on there (or ForestPack)
              Kind Regards,
              Morne

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              • #22
                For now, I did a cut/paste in PS. I didn't get any carpet colors or patterns, so I'll probably get a chance to work more on the carpet.

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                • #23
                  Here, I tried Forest Pro for the carpet, which turned out pretty good.

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                  • #24
                    Some updates, after client review and comments.

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                    • #25
                      Hey Bobby these are all looking good! I'm sure the client loved it.

                      If I have to be fussy from a 3D guy perspective:
                      They all need to be warmer, except the bathroom just needs some white balance. They're all a bit noisy
                      On top of that:
                      1st image - Add a mask to the 3 glasses and then add the reflection element as a top layer (to brighten those glasses and give them more punch - will make it look "richer"). Pendants could do with a little glare.
                      3rd image - The background looks like just a jpg, not HDRI, so it's washing out different and badly compared to what and HDRI would. In image2 the background looks nicer
                      4th image - In the mirror, I can see the hotspot from the downlight on the wall, but the actual fitting in the ceiling look switched off

                      Don't take these comments too harshly. I'm just being picky. I'm sure any client would love the images
                      Kind Regards,
                      Morne

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                      • #26
                        All good. These are lower resolution/quality proofs. I agree with needing a warm filter, and everything else, for that matter.

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                        • #27
                          I tried another view, however, I am on the fence.

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                          • #28
                            I did a white balance on the others. I don't know if I am looking at these too much, but they are lacking something. Looking back on earlier ones, it's getting better, but there is nothing special about them.

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                            Bobby Parker
                            www.bobby-parker.com
                            e-mail: info@bobby-parker.com
                            phone: 2188206812

                            My current hardware setup:
                            • Ryzen 9 5900x CPU
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                            • NVIDIA GeForce RTX 4090 X2
                            • ​Windows 11 Pro

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                            • #29
                              Good renders, are you using a sun + sky?

                              The problem for me is the background image, it is far too blue and the angle is wrong on that picture making it obvious that it is a 2d graphic as a background (the horizon is in the wrong spot) for the living room shot.
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                              • #30
                                Okay, hopefully, these are done and better. Still, not excited about them, but I'm probably getting tired of looking at them.

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                                Bobby Parker
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                                e-mail: info@bobby-parker.com
                                phone: 2188206812

                                My current hardware setup:
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