Charlesgate Realty

[glorybound]

Here is one that I have been working on. I am seeing a pattern where the architect provides the developer/real estate a rendering, but the developer/real estate wants something better. Actually, I have had several project this year that, this is the case.



I have some work to do; this is the first iteration.

[Morne]

Looking good so far.
Just that "pinky" car on the right is driving into the wall a bit (if their's a basement garage maybe, but I can't see the entrance.)
oh and I can't see the sex of the driver of that car, but she's driving into the wall

[glorybound]

Looking good so far. Just that "pinky" car on the right is driving into the wall a bit (if their's a basement garage maybe, but I can't see the entrance.) oh and I can't see the sex of the driver of that car, but she's driving into the wall

that car is now gone. There is a parking garage in there, but working on the other side I removed the car anyway.

[glorybound]

Here is the other view, which is showing the try-level next to the new building.

[flino2004]

is the three level building part of the development?

[glorybound]

is the three level building part of the development?

yes, it is part of the development,

Bobby Parker www.bobby-parker.com

[flino2004]

I like the renderings, the only thing that I would change so far is the runners.

[glorybound]

3D People are getting better, but they just don't always work.

[Morne]

2nd Image is also nice. Somehow I like it more than the 1st.
Maybe add some moblur to the runners?

One thing I noticed however, you have 2 light sources here casting shadows. One from the sun and another from the HDRI sky. Or maybe 2 suns with different intensities. You can see the hard dark shadow is the main one from a "high" sun. Then there is a lighter shadow from a much lower sun angle. It's very obvious on the buildings, not so much on the tress, people cars etc

[glorybound]

I'll double check that. I am using an HDRI with a V-Ray Sun, but it should be aligned. Maybe, it's reflection in the brick.

2nd Image is also nice. Somehow I like it more than the 1st.
Maybe add some moblur to the runners?

One thing I noticed however, you have 2 light sources here casting shadows. One from the sun and another from the HDRI sky. Or maybe 2 suns with different intensities. You can see the hard dark shadow is the main one from a "high" sun. Then there is a lighter shadow from a much lower sun angle. It's very obvious on the buildings, not so much on the tress, people cars etc

[AJ Jefferies]

To me the brick walls look more like a pattern printed on wallpaper. I actually like a bit of reflection on brickwork but it's pretty strong in your renders and there's no clear definition of the mortar.

As for the runners, they do look a bit silly but I think this is because they're 3d scans of people statically holding those poses, so they look exactly like people stood on the street, holding those poses. Not much you can do about that!

[glorybound]

I avoided displacement, hoping the distance would hide the flatness. I have since added a displacement map.

[glorybound]

Some displacement with UVW Wrapping on the road.

[joconnell]

Are you using reinhard colour mapping with a burn less than 1 on these renders? It seems like a lot of the saturation is being robbed?

[glorybound]

No, but I agree. This last one looks a little flat. I did change the lighting setup, so I might have to pull the lighting from a previous iteration. I am using Linear color mapping.