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  • MN Surf Shop

    Not much, just a quickie. This is for a local guy who is trying to get work, so basically, I'll probably will not see a dime if he doesn't get the job. Not a problem, as long as I know that going in .

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    Last edited by glorybound; 13-03-2016, 07:07 PM.
    Bobby Parker
    www.bobby-parker.com
    e-mail: info@bobby-parker.com
    phone: 2188206812

    My current hardware setup:
    • Ryzen 9 5900x CPU
    • 128gb Vengeance RGB Pro RAM
    • NVIDIA GeForce RTX 4090
    • ​Windows 11 Pro

  • #2
    Looks nice for a quickie. Is the DOF rendered?
    In the 2nd shot, you're using those bushes again with the "flat" material on them. It needs some work otherwise use your other bushes that look much nicer. The trees in the background looks cool, although I would say they don't look dark green enough, a bit pale?

    Shouldn't the jogger be flipped to run into the pic instead of out?
    (Also, maybe stick a surfboard under his arm)

    I realise this one is probably already done and dusted as it was a quickie, I was just writing down my thoughts...

    Nice Spark model, which shop is it from?
    Last edited by Morne; 14-03-2016, 03:48 PM.
    Kind Regards,
    Morne

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    • #3
      I agree with all your comments. I had the runner running into the scene, however, the point was the town seeing the fence dumpster space, so I slide him over last second. The DOF was in V-Ray.
      Bobby Parker
      www.bobby-parker.com
      e-mail: info@bobby-parker.com
      phone: 2188206812

      My current hardware setup:
      • Ryzen 9 5900x CPU
      • 128gb Vengeance RGB Pro RAM
      • NVIDIA GeForce RTX 4090
      • ​Windows 11 Pro

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