W.I.P. Hotel

[gitano_anton]

This is my latest work. The Baluma Hotel
Hope you like it. Give me ideas to better it before deadline

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[TJE]

Here's a couple of suggestions:

Move the sun or camera, so that a shadow side of the building is visible. There's a huge lack of contrast in your picture because the sun is directly behind the camera.

You definately need a better glass material - search the forum.

Stick a horizon in there, and do something about the green sky, so that it is the same as the reflections.

Correct the camera, so that you don't have tilting angles.

Your materials are too 'clean' - use some noise/bump to fix this.

The color of the palms is off - remove some blue in the map.

A few cars on the road?

[tom schuelke]

Hmm,

weel what would i say making it better, Just tell the architect, to try it again.

but thats not your foult of course.

Tom

[gitano_anton]

different countries, different styles

This is a typical hotel of the "Costa del Sol", for me isn´t ugly at all

[casewolf]

Hehe, Tom

[olitech]

definitely need to texture those buildings...this will help with the lack of scale

[TJE]

I'll bet that's not the color of the sky in Costa del Sol?

[reza]

WITH THE RIGHT AMOUNT OF COLOR, TEXTURE AND LIGHT...IT WILL DO GOOD.

[TRGraphics]

You have different windows reflecting different colored skys! Thats is the most obvious problem that I see. The lack of texture is another.

As mentioned earlier you really need to change the angle of the sun. The image looks very flat and lifeless becasuse of the lack of contrast. The walls look like they are self illuminated instead of lit by the sun. Please change that sky background.

A little more attention to detail and this could be a nice image!

Tony

[zone]

Good work, AMIGO!

What is said, U know it BEST !

My suggestion is also about the CAMERA....
Because these are TWINs, it's not necessary to show the BOTH in the
RENDER-Frame.... which will help U bring the CAMERA closer....

Then twist it so that it looks at the 1 thouroughly and half of the other....
THUS U'll get the impression of DEPTH...

And finally, LOWER it /close to the ground/ - THUS U'll fake the vision
and they would look much bigger.....
Probably a good place would BE in the FENCE corner....

NOW it seems like a TOY.... that's because of LACK of background, to
scale'em with....

GOOD WORK, Again!
GR

[Harutium]

This is by far the worst I've seen from you in this forum , Anton!
Poor modeling, illumination,camera location,environment (or lack of)materials,plants ...!
That looks like a pic of a scale model
Start from scratch again and use your self-criticism!
Joer, tio, que tu pudes molar!

[olivierfR]

oi !
yeap, the design is not so good even if it is "traditional" there !!
you can make better... i am sure
just tell yourself what can improve the final image and its design impact...in term of camera angle and lighting...
move the camera to the street level... eye level, get such a composition where a lot of thing happeming on the ground and few elegante vertical lines towards the top of the image...
move the sun...like Thomas says... that you can get more contrast..relevant in such a sunny and hot place...
get some texture..please...change the sky !
some peoples not much..just enough.
or maybe i am wrong... your avatar tells more