weekend apartments

[giraffe]

hi - please write your coments and critiques

[giraffe]

and the night view:

[TJE]

Very nice, giraffe! I think it would benefit the picture if you could see more sky.

Stick more light inside the building in the night view, and it will come alive bigtime.

The pool is excellent!

Good work!

[Da_elf]

very very nice. i love the pool. i agree about a little more light in the windows in the night version.

[gitano_anton]

let´s see the settings

Very good image, what lightning!!
Can you post the settings,please

[jet crow]

what about trees? (plugin)

[giraffe]

thank you very much for your replies

tje: do you mean the night shot or daylight? or both

da-elf : you are right

gitano_anton: settings for night or day?

jet crow: they are from got3d

[TJE]

Both I guess... They both feel e bit 'cramped', if you know what I mean.

[giraffe]

yes, now looked at the dictionary

[cocolas]

nice!!...I especially like the day shot...very warm atmosphere....I agree w/ more artificial lighting in the night shot to make come alive.



good work,


paul.

PS: after looking at it again I see that the back walls have some kinda rough stone work on them.....it seems pretty big stone work.....kinda overscaled...but it could be that that's how big they are....don't know, just pointing it out

[zone]

OOhhhaaaa..
Nice WORK there....!

just some very small details I think, got my attention, ....
NOT that You may pass away without having them on mind, but I
think this shows that it's a CG work.... /talking 'bout the day-LIGHT one/

THE Mapping of the STONE texture is a bit LARGE.... maybe
/just my opinion /

[Erkut]

great work.i really like the day one.especially the pool
but i have to agree with the others about the night shot.
needs more strong lights and maybe some lens effects.
and the background look like early morning than night..
nice images btw.

[giraffe]

thanks for your replies and critiques

stonework is in that scale in real too-so it may seem out of scale but the wall itself is in large scale

and I guess I must work more on the night shot - but to tell the truth I got bored

[cocolas]

but to tell the truth I got bored

hehehe...ohh, I know the feeling all too well

if I stay too long on a project I get that as well........I have to move on...


paul

[giraffe]

there must be a term for this in artist jargon- something sounding as sophisticated like "da vinci complex"