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  • Hope you like it now

    Here is the final version of the hotel i posted a few days ago.
    C&C are welcome

  • #2
    hi
    pool water looks nice
    adding some bump to walls may look more realistic. and the repeating trees make it unreal.

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    • #3
      Oi,
      I don't see so much change...
      yes ! the background ! but it doesn't match ! ( perspective point...)
      please... the glass , change it.
      cheers
      olivierfR

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      • #4
        constructive critics

        The background does match.And the glass in the large windows is mirrored glass, for me it´s correctly. Or you know the type of glass is it?
        Change this, change that. what type of change?
        Please contructive critics
        Se ven muy bien los toros desde la barrera!

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        • #5
          about the glass..., you could try adding a little bit of noise bump to it, you choose the size that suits you the best but use a bump value around 2-4, also, you could try using a hdri sky as a reflection if you have some, it kinda looks dull this way, im not exactly sure why, but it maybe that the clouds are too blured and dark. its just too dark compared to the background.
          I think noise can help, because you need something to break the monotony of such a large surface.

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          • #6
            Hey Pepe,

            Well its diffinately looking better, but as I mentioned in my PM reply you still need to increase the contrast of your lit/unlit areas. Right now it looks like it is lit on a overcast day and from the background there is barely a cloud in the sky. Maybe instead of explaining this I'll show you what I mean.

            This literally took me ten minutes in photoshop. Do you see what I mean. I hope you don't mind me editing you image, but I hope it helps.

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            • #7
              an image says much than thousand words !
              i think he is right... you should put more contrast...
              it is a f*** sunny place overthere...come on ! you always get such a contrast between sunny area and shadow side !

              ciao
              olivierfR

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