Single storey houses

[jackieteh]

Hi, this is a freelance project i have done recently, which one do you prefer, with people or without people?

3ds max, vray, photoshop.

ps: client asking to add people into the scene, but rejected it after complete

[jackieteh]

No one willing give me some help?

[Syclone1]

I prefer it without the people, reason being is the lighting on the people is different from the scene and they also look out of place to me. Like the two in front of the driveway, to me they are jerks for standing there. If the homeowner wants to come or go then they are in the way, and then the guy on the sidewalk Im getting a creepy vibe from as it looks like he is paying far too much attention to the poor lady and her kid trying to enjoy the day in her yard. Lastly there is the mini that needs to get to the repair garage as it is not near cold enough by the looks of it to see the exhaust so that's kind of a negative as well. Other than that the rest looks good, maybe a bit too much contrast for my personal taste but good job.

-dave

[oophus]

Remove the people, or at least find someone that matches the lighting in your scene.

The guy in front have his jacket lit from the right side, but his shadow tells a different story of where the light is coming from. It totally breaks the illusion, and its way to easy to see that its fake.

[glorybound]

I would remove the people and the car. I think with those gone, the image would benifit from it.

[jackieteh]

I prefer it without the people, reason being is the lighting on the people is different from the scene and they also look out of place to me. Like the two in front of the driveway, to me they are jerks for standing there. If the homeowner wants to come or go then they are in the way, and then the guy on the sidewalk Im getting a creepy vibe from as it looks like he is paying far too much attention to the poor lady and her kid trying to enjoy the day in her yard. Lastly there is the mini that needs to get to the repair garage as it is not near cold enough by the looks of it to see the exhaust so that's kind of a negative as well. Other than that the rest looks good, maybe a bit too much contrast for my personal taste but good job.

-dave

Thank you very much for your comments, if my client ask me to take out all the people in this drawing and the reason is like what you gave me now, i will accept it.

[jackieteh]

Remove the people, or at least find someone that matches the lighting in your scene.

The guy in front have his jacket lit from the right side, but his shadow tells a different story of where the light is coming from. It totally breaks the illusion, and its way to easy to see that its fake.

thank you, i will take it out and do a new render before i post to my website.

[jackieteh]

I would remove the people and the car. I think with those gone, the image would benifit from it.

you mean the "mini"?

[glorybound]

Yes, the Mini Cooper. I had one, but my family grew out of it, so we had to move to an SUV. I miss the little guy.

[jackieteh]

Yes, the Mini Cooper. I had one, but my family grew out of it, so we had to move to an SUV. I miss the little guy.

you are great! my client just asked me to delete the Mini Cooper two days ago