building at the city

[silver]

hello folks
a new work coming up, i am working on the others images, so tell me what do you think about this firt one and as soon as i have finished them, i will post here.

[Erik de Graaf]

Man,

I love your rpc's .

Nice image, i like the subtle reflections in the wall tiles.

Erik

[Mark David]

hey Silver, congrats man, the image in it self looks great and the RPC too, beautifull women...

Thats the way it goes man,

[Da_elf]

i find the image has way too much contrast though.

[schorsch5]

can´t help myself - is this realy 3d? with the rpc-people - the umbrellas and the dark funiture under it - the plants and building (on such a sunny day, there should be much more illumination) - the hole picture remembers me to a collage where you cut different pictures and glue them together

[silver]

schorsch5,
i guess you are in the wrong place or maybe in a bad day or even though have some familiar problem, because off course i am far distant to be a master but i also know that your bad words arent expecteds in a job were i've been working for so long and have tried to make my best... so man, if you have some problem, keep it to yourself and dont come with this sort of comments wich are far from help any person. When we post something here we expect to hear constructive coments and no to see somebody wich i have never even seen a job here saying this kind of things you put about my image.
this is my simple answer for what you wrotte

[dusan]

I must admitt, it does feel like its made out of several completly different elements glued together. But i guess its mostly due to plants and people since they're really out of place. A different sun position would help a lot, the shadows from the umbrellas are way too dark, looks very unnatural and its really bad for the composition. Its weird, while most of your elemets are burnt out, the top of the building is kinda dark, it seems to me that you've put an insanly big sun multiplier and low or maybe even no skylight.
Use some exposure control, reduce your multipliers or something, i really dont know what else to say. Id like to se the scene with only 3d elements.

[silver]

ok dusan, thanks by tips, i think might be because i turns off secound bounce, i wsa trying to find out a way to let things faster and secound bounce really slow down too much.. anyway the way you told me this makes me realize the problem because you put it in a simple form and shows the focus of the problem, thanks