Winery - Long Island New York

[Morne]

Hi guys

Here's a nice one I worked on recently in Long Island.

[glorybound]

Nice work and it looks like a fun project.

[Morne]

Thanks! Yes it was a lot of fun.

[prateekvishwa]

somehow sky doesnt match with the warmth of the image.. also something wrong with the shrubs in second image? otherwise nice.

[Morne]

somehow sky doesnt match with the warmth of the image.

In what way? What would you do with the sky to make it better?

also something wrong with the shrubs in second image? otherwise nice.

Which shrubs are you referring to?

[glorybound]

I wouldn't place my horizon smack dab in the middle of my scene. Usually, what is more important should take up more of the real estate (sky or foreground). I like to have mine along the bottom 3rd.

[prateekvishwa]

In what way? What would you do with the sky to make it better?

Which shrubs are you referring to?

shadows suggest your sun is really low and imo sky appears to be of day light.. i may be wrong.. other experts may suggest better.. i just said what i felt

[JezUK]

Nice images, compositions and modelling.

I'd like to see some imperfections - it all looks too pristine

Good work though Morne

[flino2004]

the sun on the second view in my opinion should be on the left to get more balance between direct light/shadows/ambient light/

[windrockwater]

I think the plantings are hurting the overall image. The round hedge plants doesnt look right:

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com...08148e5628.jpg

The grass is too perfect like astroturf.

Maybe the camera is at a strange height location?

I don't love the architecture design. But Long Island is known for some weird architecture. Ha! Is this on the north fork or south fork. Its nice for me to see renderings near me for once!

[Morne]

Thanks for all the comments so far guys. The client is making some minor design changes to the building. With the new renders, all take some of your suggestions under consideration.