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  • ..Some new work..

    Here's a couple of image's ive recently done fo a client of mine.
    All comments welcome.. im not happy with the carpet, but time constraits didnt allow me to Displace it..

    NPR Version




    Desaturated version




    Original Version





    Regards
    Natty
    http://www.rendertime.co.uk

  • #2
    nice work!

    i personally prefer the original version... looks a lot 'cleaner' than the NPR version if you get wahat i mean...

    my only comment would be that the displacement on the glass looks a bit too large...

    also i'm not sure about the placement of the ottoman in the centre of the chairs... perhaps a coffee table might be more useful?

    cheers...
    when the going gets weird, the weird turn pro - hunter s. thompson

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    • #3
      Yes i agree with you s0real..
      the Ottoman was a request by the client..
      i'll adjust the glass ... thanks
      Natty
      http://www.rendertime.co.uk

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      • #4
        i'm sure they'll see the error of their ways when somebody spills a coffee all over it when trying to use it as a table...

        bloody clients... always thinking they know best...
        when the going gets weird, the weird turn pro - hunter s. thompson

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        • #5
          HEHEH.....yes your right.. style over practicality !!
          Natty
          http://www.rendertime.co.uk

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          • #6
            Hi Natty

            nice work so far.

            I think at first i maybe would try to get a bit higher with my perspective it seems a bit unrelistic low (of course not for my son )

            Also i think i would love a bit more contrasts in the scene, now every wher semes to be light, some areas to focus on could improve the architectural situation i think

            tom

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            • #7
              great image! Also prefer the original. Something bothers me though. Check out the circled portion of the attached image:



              your recessed lighting and the glass wall seem crooked and detached from the ceiling. Hope you see what Im getting at.

              Oh, and the shadows under the chairs are awfully sharp.

              percy
              ____________________________________

              "Sometimes life leaves a hundred dollar bill on your dresser, and you don't realize until later that it's because it fu**ed you."

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              • #8
                Thanks for your comments guy's ... all well Appreciated ..
                your right about the lights percy .. i had to drag the ies's back a little to go through the glass properly .. but i didnt notice the unalignment .. thanks.
                Natty
                http://www.rendertime.co.uk

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                • #9
                  Man..I have only one thing to say.... ....nothing....

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                  • #10
                    Wonderful images!

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                    • #11
                      The third is very inviting.

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                      • #12
                        The roughness of the glass seems a little bit out of scale...too large imo...The image is nice!
                        Valerio

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                        • #13

                          Natty Natty Natty when will you ever get it wrong

                          Original Rocks

                          HughG

                          If you get the time Settings n mats

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