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  • Eastbrook

    I don't think clients understands the work the goes into these bad boys . It's pushing and nudging everything until it falls into place.

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  • #2
    a lot blue, contrast and street light in my opinion.....maybe the one on the center in front of the house should be on the other house (the right one) ....the red/brown door should be less reflective as well as the street light posts I think.
    show me the money!!

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    • #3
      The street lights are, where they are, becasue of the plan. If I move them I am sure they'll want them back. I'll agree about the doors and overall color temp.
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      • #4
        Update. Let's see if they noticed a slide a light pole

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        • #5
          The areas where you have ambient light don't look like they have GI ....the whole scene looks very CGI way different from your previous exterior renderings
          show me the money!!

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          • #6
            I'm struggling with this one; something is broken. I have rebuilt the scene several times, but something is still off with the darks.
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            • #7
              I don't think it looks too terribly bad. Most of the problem was the dark siding next to the white siding.
              Bobby Parker
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              • #8
                You went the wrong way around with your highlights/shadows

                Cool your highlights and warm your shadows, it just makes the whole thing pop a bit more, also make the sky fit a bit better

                In PS (or Affinity Photo) stick a Color Balance adjustment layer at the very top. Then in highlights add blue and cyan. In Shadows add red and yellow.
                In my quick test with your image, for highlights -10 cyan and +10 blue, and in shadows +7 red and -7 yellow looks a bit better, but obviously tweak it to your liking
                Kind Regards,
                Morne

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                • #9
                  You guys have good eyes. I tried something new, which didn't work.
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                  • #10
                    Okay, I followed my original post receipt. Here is an update.

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                    • #11
                      Hope you dont mind:
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                      Kind Regards,
                      Morne

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                      • #12
                        Balanced better, hopefully.

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                        • #13
                          Yes, nice. Warmer than mine.

                          Originally posted by Morne View Post
                          Hope you dont mind:
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                          • #14
                            Still looks really funky. I think your whites are way too blown out and your blacks are super black. Also the purple sky and color cast is a bit much. I tried to do a tweak but given the whites and black both being clipped, it's impossible to recover. What does your raw render look like?
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                            • #15
                              I might have to rebuild the scene.
                              Bobby Parker
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