a kitchen + living room

[a320]

got the idea from combining a few differen't kitchen setups ive seen in architectual books. Any crit/comments very welcome
thanks.

[tom182]

looks real nice, one thing that did jump out at me was the oranges on the counter (not in the bowl) they need a reflection/shadow on the counter.
environment image looks too bright
great work though
Tom

[cocolas]

looks pretty good overall....but I have a couple comments:

your fruit seems "pasted" in on top of the image....you need to have some shadows to ground them into the image.....

your reflection as tom mentioned on the counter seem a bit too intense...

the image in the background seems a bit to strong/clear......you need to desaturate it a bit as well

good lighting


paul

[ravexl]

Nice work. I agree with the other comments made. Looks great, post updates!

[vince_1972]

very cool

only the oranges without shadows are strange

Vince

[tom182]

just noticed something, did u add in some of the lights in the ceiling using photoshop? if u look at them accross the screen in a left to right manner it appears that the 2nd one is tilted at an angle that isnt in line with the perspective of the room. Also the one just infront of the wooden shelving/cabinet looks like it is not sunken into the ceiling, I could be wrong,

Tom

[sandpiper]

I think that the canlights look that way because of the camera distortion. My theory at least!

[a320]

thanks for all the comments guys, yeah the oranges didn't get enough love and care hehe, ill make sure ill fix them next time

i think the 90degree angle of the camera might be causing a lil unwanted distortion to the lights.. might have to photofudge them

cheers

[Matt_3D]

Awesome stuff

That bloody RPC fruit How did you make the fruit? Kind of looks like they've been cropped from a photo and added in Photoshop. Fruit looks good on its own, but doesn't fit in with the scene...yet.

Love the cooktop area and the lights look really nice apart from the slight distortion on some of them.

-Matt

[sunnyc1]

Nice render.

Nice downlight fittings. They look good, although if the downlights were actually on, I don't think you'd see the reflective inside surface that well.

I agree with all the other comments so far. In addition though, I reckon a little more bump on your floor tiles wouldn't hurt.

By the way, the image in the background looks a little like an image of Sydney from Star City Casino. Are you Sydney based? If so we should catch up and have a chat.

SunnyC

[mukks]

wow ver nice render,,,,, can u pls share that down light model....

[smooth]

light it to strong in the left part of the kitchen
then the wall reflacts to much the background
the oranges seems like they are floating
but overall great peace of work....