light and concrete

[gustavobenites]

light and concrete are an image of the repression which many people imposes to yourselves. To keep them hot and warm inside their proper mind their raise great walls around, the light is the cold criticizes of the world.



hugs,
gustavo benites

[Geddart]

Wow - that's nice! really artistic!
The concrete is awesome!

[plastic_]

great lighting...what bothers me is the scale of the objects and the ground texture...there's something wrong, especially with the couch in the corner.

[ml-a]

Something is weird in your image, except that the concrete is really great.
The floor can't be made of one iron plate. Scale is wrong.

But hey light is inside the walls

[cocolas]

...what bothers me is the scale of the objects and the ground texture...there's something wrong, especially with the couch in the corner.

same here..good lighting...but the scale of the furniture in comapre to the room seem really distracting......

nice textures


paul.

[Geddart]

Yeah - me again. I really like this Image but i have to agree with the others about the Composition.
What i like about the Lightning is it's simplicity, how it interacts with the materials. For me it looks somewhat surreal! This Image is cool, but... i think it could be still cooler. What stands out now are those objects in the corner. It seems you have a little Story about that picture. When there are really people livin in the Room, i would put in some more and better objects inside.

I don't know if this started as something for a client but i'd really like to see some surreal objects in this cool Room. Something Industrial, complex Stuff with cool materials or just stylish Objects and Forms maybe? When you arrange the Items in the room try to think about how the Viewer will move it's Eyes from strong Contrast to the darker areas on the right. I would also try to push the Light effect you have there further. Have you tried a little white glow there yet? Make it really shiny and cold in my Opinion. What i can think of too, is another format for the Picture. I would like to see a test with an 'HDTV like' format. This Picture still has a Lot of Potential!

Well these are just some thoughts and one could make something totally different and cool.
I would not leave it like this though. Please keep it on and really finish the cool thing you began here.

[gustavobenites]

Hi!!!!!

Thanks for the C&C's.... I has finish this image, but now with the comments, I'm working again in this scene.

sorry my english... But I'm trying to find the right words to say what I think.

The walls are really higher than furniture but it is proposital... I tried to create an opressive but larger environment. The cold side comes from the concrete walls and the warm side comes from the rug and the red chaise especially.

So.... I´ve liked your sugestions, i´ll change the scene.

hugs,
gustavo benites

[ml-a]

Show us the new version, we are curious to see it!

cheers

[xerife]

The lighting and the concrete walls are very, very good. Unfortunately the floor and the little (wrong scale!) sofa ruin the scene.