a mall

[kippu]

ok heres a mall ...pretty much empty in the inside though



please comment

[kippu]

any comments ???

[ml-a]

Hi
some comments

- About the un-framed glass curtain wall with spider support - the spiders must have a structure where to connect and also the glass panels must be seemable.(can't see the edges of the panels)
- Probably i would use the same glass material on the exterior with the reflection on them
- there are facets on the roof
- use higher hsph, there are odd surfaces on the shadowed parts

just this for now
cheers

[olewind]

Hi,

The white wall to the right seems a little bit too white compared to the light in the original image. Assuming this was a real photo taken in daylight it would probably have been taken with a relative high shutterspeed and therefore I think the moving car and the scooter has too much motionblur. Otherwise nice work - I like the dark windows and reflections !

Regards,
Ole

[natty]

Hi Kippu..

Overall the image is ok, but a few point's let it down.. The glass needs to be in sections rather than a complete sheet... as said before the spider supports would be themselve's be supported.
The mat on the edge of the stairs looks odd.
The roof section looks very faceted.
The wall to the right is over-blown.
All the facade glass would probably be silicon jointed, so you would see that.
The cars are parked on grass? would that be normal for an office enviroment?
A miner point but the shadows are slightly going the wrong way.
The car to the left of the image has a lot of motion blur but it shadow does'nt.

[kippu]

thanks for your comments ...

[maximinso]

I like the glass marked with "X". Very original.

[natty]

This is a good example of some glass supports