House at Los Cabos

[Rolojero]

Hello this is my first attempt to post edit a render in photopaint -hope is not too bad but please C&C

http://www.renderman.8k.com/images/perspectiva_04.jpg

Saludos desde los Cabos!!

[doan]

the stone wall is nice ! my only comments will be about the palm trees. Try to orient them differently. And also I would make the bckg a bit clear according to your sun intensity.
Nice work though

[hughg]

Now that is now bad at all !!!! Displace the grass a little more, generally upp AAs , and light match the Palm tree better...


HughG

[stellar]

it's looking nice but the sun comes from the right on the foreground (the stone wall) and it comes from left on the background (the house)

[paulison]

Maybee the building is rendered and the background/ foreground is photographic? (i think that would explain the shadows). Is photopaint a program like photoshop?



nice work though! (i didnt notice the shadow thing so much)

[Rolojero]

Hello, Tks for the replies and comments!!

Yes the background and the front walls are from a photograph and yes i notice (to late) the diference with the shadows

Look here is a couple of images with the walls made in max because i have no where to stand up to take a picture of the terrain from this view

http://renderman.8k.com/images/persp_05.jpg

http://renderman.8k.com/images/sepia.jpg