building ....

[Sergio78]

Hi all, c&c are welcome.

greetings,
Sergio

[Hallock]

Nice composition. A few things that stick out to me though are:

- The brick is too repetative, I can see the 'seams' in it.
- Give the white material an actual texture, a subtle noise material might even do.
- The wire coming across the building, just get rid of it if you can't get rid of the sky surrounding it.
- The two wires near the top of the building appear to be piercing the structure itself.