Its been sooo long...

[Zero One 010110]

Hello guys! it's been so long since i post something, and i need some freash crits, so.. shoot!!

[natty]

looking good Jorge ..

my only crits are that the grass needs cutting ... ... and your vertical lines are going in to much ..

[cyrille32]

its pretty nice, i like the architecture (even if i think the upper windows on top of the parking place should be bigger).
The people dont fit, try to color match them (they seem oversaturated) and their black area is too deep compared to the background.

[yage]

i don't like the right windows at all. they look strange and do not fit as well.
the grass also needs to be cutted. but nice lighting (except the splotches ) and modelling so far.

[Shishok]

i love that grass, nice pic!

[Shishok]

you need to use camera correction modifer to improove vertical lines. everything other is great! and what about to make right windows like this:

[metroberlin]

throw out the people...pleeease

[ml-a]

The leftside windows can't be made from one piece. Window need a transom. Entrance door is too little or your people are too big.

[Zero One 010110]

Ok, i'll lower the grass, try a camera correction, and fix the people, but i can't throw them out, people like to see themselves in their "new houses", i couldn't find the splotches yage!, and i couldn't look at the windows shishok, if you can give me another link please!

And ml-a, i know that the left windows can't be made on one pice, but it can be done in 2, and they dont need a support halfway either, so, i thought this way look better and without the hassle to explain all this to a client (because its my architecture and i'm about to build 5 of this houses) as for transom, i don't understand what's that, but if im right, its a full arch over a window? because if its that, i think that would look terrible in this architecture. And finally, the door its 2.15 meters high and my people its 1.82 meters high, triple checked, maybe its the depth you dont see right, but it is.

Thanks everyone!!

[ml-a]

support halfway

thats a transom. Still think it is needed.

[Shishok]

i couldn't look at the windows shishok, if you can give me another link please!

improved...

[Zero One 010110]

hehehe kinda spooky that someone changes your file so easily shishock!! hehehe looks very cool indeed, but the tiny little windows are the bathroom windows , so, i think i cant change that, but maybe ill try something like that (only smaller) thanks!!!

[ulises]

very nice render!!! a little yellow keeping posting

[Shishok]

hehehe kinda spooky that someone changes your file so easily shishock!!

it is not me, it is Photoshop

[Zero One 010110]

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