1 more for the road.....(Updated)

[reza]

Please comment on the render below. Thanks.

[Nenad]

Overall, the image looks really nice. Great amount of work. I especially like the way the light gets rythmically into the room through the doors. It puts a lot of life in there.

But what stands out at a glance is the unique map on the stairs. Maybe you should try mapping the steps separately with some variation. Also, the doorframe on the right looks a bit too... perfect. Try beveling the edges and maybe do something with the material as well.

Keep it up.

Nenad

[ml-a]

Nice work, but is a problem with your stair. Too many steps and mapping as nenad says.

[natty]

Looks good Reza ...you learn quick my friend..

[reza]

Thanks for the comments guys....i didnt realize the patern of the wood was there...its a big scene, 3 floors with every room modeled. youre right about the door frame....it does need beveling and i just notice that there is a gap on top of the first door. natty..it is people like you and others who actually make people like me better. thanks a bunch

[Nenad]

3 floors with every room modeled

Hehe, great. Does this mean we'll have the pleasure see more renders?

[ml-a]

welcome

[archcanvas]

Like the atmosphere, my crit is that the red wall on the left looks a bit unatural. Giving a bit higher render settings and do some post-processing, the image will be great.

[reza]

i dont have the time to render each room now but i guess i can give you and idea of the building and furniture with the exploded view below.

[Da_elf]

what can i say. awsome work. i agree about the steps map and cant wait to see the rest of the building

[Nenad]

Hey, that's a lot of objects Reza! Did you explode them step by step or did you you use any special function or plugin for that?

[reza]

No Nenad, i just move the walls and floors to the left and down......it took 5 hours to render the image above...i was to lazy to hide the objects....

[reza]

Believe it or not, this is 1 of Ogilvy's meeting room.