w.i.p. exterior

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hi all
its my last work
c/c welcome.
http://img98.exs.cx/img98/2725/geo-house-copy.jpg

[Focusing]

After a long wait for the image to load I finally manage to see it.
Here goes my opinion about this work. I can't feel any bump in the stone textures or if there is it's not perceptible (try using displacement). The composition puts your house in a tree surround ambient, but you can't see any reflection of those same trees in the glass reflection. The rpc's for the flowers don't look good.
Try fixing these problems and I think that the image will look a lot better.

[archcanvas]

Fantastic rendering!

Some minor things, just thought that there should be some trees reflected on the window glass, as Focusing pointed it out. Also what do you think cropping the image a little bit? the bottom seems a bit too much.

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tnx for coment

[natty]

WOW ... very nice.... the curb looks a little sharp....Lovely light..

[Hussam_CG]

great exterior !

I'm wondering about the trees ..
are they just planes with an opasity map ..? or from a plug-in
cos the tree shadows are so good to be a shadow map

keep that up

Hussam

[TutanMark]

Great Job man!

Cheers,
Marco

[Zero One 010110]

Good job man, a few comments though, i think that the trees are way too big for this image, most of all the big one on the left, its as wide as the arched window of the balcony, u need to displace more the rock wall and its too dark for an exterior, even if there's so many trees around, it aint over the house, at least not all of it.

Just my 2 cents bro, great image

[Dynedain]

Wow! Great job, I only have a couple comments.

You should probably bevel the edges of the wall on the left a bit, and add displacement, it's corner look quite sharp. And it should probably be a bit thicker as well so it doesn't get knocked over

I think you either need to increase your anti-aliasing settings or check the bitmap filtering because the stone on the house looks a bit jagged and blurry.

Your lighting is fantastic, I would love to see your setup.
Great job!

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tnx for u coment
2 Hussam_CG
trees is a bgraund imaje.
2 Dynedain
setup from deneb_26.