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[kienchan]

Hi guys I would love to get some feedback on a job i did a while back.
Thanks

[kienchan]

Anyone Guys?
Is it that ordinary?........hahaha
or is there too many pics for ppl to load.
anyway to hear some feedback.

thank you

[archcanvas]

All images look dull. Try improving your lighting, colors, materials...

[TRGraphics]

No offense, but these look like scanline renders. The mapping needs a lot of work as well. In the fourth image the roof shingles are running the wrong way. Also, the brick maps in the last image have mortor joints at the very edge of the stone. In the final image, part of the brick along the wall overhangs and part of it does not. Not very natural looking.

With a little work you could have a nice set of images. Just pay attention to details and spend some time learning proper lighting. Your sky is clear but the lighting seems dull, like it was a very cloudy day. In the third and final image, I can't tell which direction the sun is shining.

Keep at it, you'll get there!

Tony

[niksoftarg]

use sunlight in the exteriors, the shadows will give more caracter....