c&c please

[Lupaz]

Hi, this work has already been sent to my client but I would like to hear some critics.
I had to use target spots with map shadows because the rendertime was too long. this one, at 1024x768, took 1hr in preset medium. No photons were used.


Thanks!

[dbuchhofer]

Crits: Why have shelves if the instruments are mounted to the walls?
Speakers come across a little flat..
lightingwise looks fine, mabye a little flat due to lack of contrasting materials in the space? but thats more design i think then rendering..
I personally don't like the glows on the recessed cieling lights, but thats mabye just me..
lastly the guys on the back wall.. might look a little wierd from inside the rooms seeing only legs?

overall looks good

Cheers,

[Lupaz]

Yeah, the design sucks (it's not mine offcourse )

But it's my first interior and wanted to know how to improve it.

Thanks man!!

[jbond04]

Use some blurry reflections on the glass, too. While they add to the rendertime, they also help realism immensly.

[jedisalf]

I like it a lot.

How you made that "sparkling glow" on the lights?..was it done with Phostoshop?...if so , how?

[Lupaz]

Jbond: yes, i tried with an image on reflection/refraction slot without good results. I was goin' to place an image on a plane in front of the glass and on the back of the camera, but I had 2 days to do this and couldn't try.

Jedisalf: it's made in PS with the filter "lens flare". It's a little strambotic, but architects usually like that, so...

Thanks for your crits!