Exterior. At last! Not interiors only.

[alkonst]

Hello. Finally I prepared EXTERIOR.
Click here
http://www.alkonst.com/1_ext.jpg
or here
http://alkonaft.dezigner.ru/1_ext.jpg

[Dynedain]

If you are planning to show this to a client, or use it in a proffessional portfolio, you might want to rethink the woman you have placed by the pool

[percydaman]

nice image though. the scale of your grass doesn't mesh with your people. Yeah the chick in the thong might be too much, I guess itll be up to the client or potential clients.

[stone145]

rocks are floating over the grass....

i would love to have a woman like that in my pool...! but in renders...i dont think so....

[Dynedain]

ledge around pool is to small...scale of peope to textures is wierd

and thats a very very cheap car for what looks like a very expensive house

and why would the swimming pool be in the front yard?

[Frances]

Give the woman in the thong a good meal. She looks starved.

[chicoone]

Are you guys refering to the forefront woman? Well, the other people in the render seem oblivious to anything about her. She could be the babysitter taking a break also. Maybe she is a neighbor or the customer requesting the render. Whomever she may be I hope she never kicks anybody in the shin.

Ismael

[Dynedain]

what i meant to say aobut the ledge around to pool is that it is too narrow (grass up against a pool is bad bad bad...every time you mow you'll get the pool full of grass clippings) and it is too tall...the thong babe is about to trip on it

[percydaman]

I have less of a problem with the width of the ledge and more with the height. Seems awfully high to mee.

[skogskalle]

apart from whats already said, I really like it.

did you sharpen this in post? if not, what AA settings did you render it with?

[Linda]

God modeling and i like the lighting as an exterior you made this things very well.
But as some mentioned before the gras is way to large, you have to scale it down a bit that was the first thing that cached my eye plus the floating stones.
Other than that i think this is a great picure.
And as for the woman i do not se a problem if this is a personal work why not, things like that can we see everyday at summertime.
But if this is for a client take hear away because we are supposed to se your nice building and rendering and not the but of this woman and that is exacly what we do now.

God work!

[giraffe]

I love lighting- this is very good lighting for exteriors.
is it linear color mapping?

the shingles mapping seem strange to me.
agree about glass

[jedisalf]

Great render.

Things mentioned i dont mind:

- the woman
- the car
-the stones.

things that i do mind:

-Grass outta scale.
-ANd i think some RPCs are outta scale also, specially looking the size of the table and chairs with the boy and dad to the right.

[cocolas]

nice piece overall......it's good to see you're doing some exteriors


I do agree with linda about the woman being distracting with respect to the building/landscape......I think substitute her with something else could be a good idea.

also the grass is out of scale as others mentioned.

and as giraffe said, the tiles on the roof look a bit strange......as if they are a bit too "flat".....maybe the texture needs some blurring or something......I think the scale is also wrong with them...

I like the lighting..


good work.

paul.

[ml-a]

I would suggest to turn the lady with the but to the house, maybe that will solve everybody's problem I'm sure the client would love it

The render looks nice except that you added too much contrast in photoshop and the reflections on the window glass is strange too.

Lighting is good.