exterior wip

[shakey3d]

i needed an exterior for my protfolio so i went back to an old model i made a few month ago, please give me some comments cause i need to make it look better.

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[chicoone]

For the sky image used; clear sky, all greenery seems too dark. Again; based on sky, there should be a stronger "skylight" contribution making all shadows less pronounced and less dark. The single bench in front of dwelling appears to have a mini Sun of its own- appears brighter than the directly lit white building. Sliding doors and all windows appear more to be made of mosquito screen. If they are glass; based on the darkness inside building, they should be reflecting 3 times as much.

Ismael

[TrtSmrt]

Nice modeling work, I agree with remarks to glass, and also could you turn down the glow a little. Like the foliage too!
Keep up the good work!

[shakey3d]

thanks for your very good comments. here is the latests render:

[Trapezium]

Still not enough blue in that skylight IMO.

--Jon

[TrtSmrt]

Still not enough blue in that skylight IMO.

--Jon

That's why god invented the Photoshop

[shakey3d]

ive used color balance and updated the image. thanks