Same house different view!!

[Rolojero]

Here is another view of the patio house, still has so many details to work on, but like i said these images will have to stay like this because tomorrow we have to show them...

I notice the arcs are so bad but i will fix them i promise

Please C&C

(alt+p)

[jedisalf]

nice image, but some issues:

- the grass is tiling
-you got some mapping issues on the rock wall
-theres part of the floor missing (i think)
-the mosaic tiles of the pool are to big
-the pool waves are to big also, looks like theres a storm
-overall it looks too cold, add some sunlight.

[giraffe]

hi
good start
u have uvw problems-grass and stone wall.
agree about the waves
please de-saturate your grass- too flourescent now.
the glass windows seem unreal. if u make bluish environment with sky etc,
it can reflect in windows too.
and u can add some yellow tint in your light.

[Rolojero]

update

Tks for your comments giraffe and jedisalf they are very usefull

Here is an update of the image:

[odie]

1)you should work on your compositing. I believe you are using Photoshop for the foliage i looks stiff try cropping the image with some feather in the selection to make the image blend with the environment.

[jedisalf]

Hey...looking great!

I think you should tone down the noise on the water, the waves still a little too big, however, it looks good, so is up to you to chaneg it or leave it.

One thing i would change is the sunlight, i would reduce the enviroment light and increase the "yellowish" sunlight, because even though it looks more "warm" than the first image, still look cold, it should be a sunny day, just my opinion.