wip of a building

[p1e2re]

what do you think of it? comments and critics welcome

[archprog]

that's a great Zaha Hadid design!!!,it is built in France i think , also an interior photo of it appears in the splash screen of viz4.

I looks good but the image is a little flat and washed out, i would put the sun hitting one of the two sides so it gives it more depth and more contrast.

the background looks nice

how did you model the building?, from photos or from plans

can you show your render settings?

[Trapezium]

It's very dark and would probably have allot of direct light on a day like your background image is depicting. The building is really neat but it just makes me wonder what the rest of it looks like. Colors aren't too saturated which is a good start.


--Jon

[p1e2re]

i made it with photos and plans

[p1e2re]

thanks for your advice
i am trying new lighting what do you think of it ?

[stephan_MA]

it is built in weil am rhein! germany!

regards
S.Wolf

[Mirko]

It looks much better now.

@Stephan: Where could I find this building in Weil am Rhein? Should really travel to W.a.R. for cloth shopping, soon.
Maybe I could persuade my girlfriend to visit that building.

Mirko

[asango]

significantly better...the shadows do a great job of defining the shape of the building. good job

[archprog]

it looks a lot better with that lighting, keep it up


@stephan_MA : yep , you're right thanks for the info.

@Mirko : if you go to Weil am Rhein, would it be possible for you to take some pictures of the building and post them here? that'd be great , i couldn't find many good pictures on the web. i'm on the other end of the world so a trip there is out of the question

[Mirko]

@archprog: well, W.a.R. is about 80 km away from where I live. But I am not sure how long it will take until I have the chance to travel to W.a.R.
At the moment I have no money for cloth (there is a famous outlet factory) - because I have to put my money by side for my wedding next year (and for honneymoon).
But if I travel to W.a.R. I will make some pictures for you!

Mirko

[p1e2re]

i ll with put shader s on it!
you 'll ask me where i have the blue print of my building i took them on a spanish/english magazine called " el croquis" there is also some blue print of this building in architecture now volume1 at the taschen editions
i put some photo of the building
http://www.theplace2be.org/forum/download.php?id=653
http://www.theplace2be.org/forum/download.php?id=654

[archprog]

@mirko ,thanks ,no problem

@p1e2re thanks for the images, i had seen the croquis but a log time ago and haven't found any other good pictures