robot

[zuliban]

a robot done for coke, so design not done by me.
1.3 millon polis max polymodeling only +vray

[Syclone1]

Nice work zuliban I quite like it.

-dave

[Karba]

Material of metal looks nice.
Why so many polygons?
Do it flew?

[jufer]

it's really very well.

The illumination is with alone hdri?
I think "much polys for the robot"
The DOF is gorgeous.
Congratulations


De que parte de México eres zuliban?
Saludos desde guanajuato

[zuliban]

it has many poligons because all the parts are very detailed, and all the scene have curve edges here you can see this tiny part:

[roppin]

maby to late for crit but I think the bumbmap dont live uåp to the detale of the model. Othewise I like the rendering

//Daniel

[rheeren]

Very nice render, but there are a few things that seem 'off':

- The DOF is very odd, like it's done with the blur tool in PS; the left antenna is blurred more in the front than in the back, it also has the same blur as the wall. Also the floor on the left side is evenly blurred regardles of camera distance while other parts of the floor receive none of it.

- The texture on the wall looks stretched in places. Especially just below the "r" in "Selvera". Seems like the whole part below that just got messed up somehow.

- The bump map on the robot is very unnatural. It looks as if someone took a screwdriver and happily carved some scratches in the robot. The dents and scratches look too even and deep to have occured naturally. But then again, perhaps that was intentional.

- What are the white stripes on the wall above the robot? They also look like they don't belong there.

Just a few things I noticed, but overall it is a great render. I really like the material of the robot.

- Rens

[lordshaitan]

Zuliban: As always its an awsome render. But this is a huge flaw that i see, mainly because of my animation background. Even though the design of the bot wasnt yours, the placement was very bad. here is the silhouette to illustrate my point


Now, no offense man, but take a look at the big black thing, now think to yourself. What is he doing? What is it? With the current placment you cannot tell 1. What it is, 2. What he is doing, 3. The mood. Infact to me it looks like a robot thing with no arms, and only feet.

Personally besides the things mentioned, that is all i can say about this besides, do you have clearance from coke to display this? I sure hope so

Anyhow, keep it up man, looks great.

[zuliban]

they liked it the idea its that the robot thigs coca cola its a robot too becase its made from a metallic material
good crtitcs btw but some are not good like dof dof its psycally correct so nothing to say there, the robot its not metal its pastic so scratches are diferent and graffity its cearly done in any city and worked to separate robot to background and yes a texture its not wellplaced there i will fix it

[ene.xis]

hummmm....well i really have to agree with rheeren,... DOF is waky...also the wall surface is bugy near the floor...i suppose it would be nice to understand better this work, cause i think everythin else is great!

off topic: critics to ur work seem to have some kind of revange feeling...don enjoy this at all. i think ur extreamly talanted and i m always pleased to see ur works and to try to understand ur workin process...keep up!ur an inspiration source!

[lone]

this is nice, i like the robot it's very detailed
keep working like that.....and the dof......
it looks like correct................nice man



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mex pow

[dbuchhofer]

critics to ur work seem to have some kind of revange feeling...

Without crits, its very hard to continue improving, the Silhouette thing is one that should be obvious to us, but wasn't to me until pointed out, not having any formal artsy background.. it helps with the design!

and i agree that the scratches either need to be a little more subtle, or they need to be on the parts of the model that would actually be possible to hit the ground to be plausable the blur right above his head also struck me as a little odd? is it an exhaust or the dof kicking in again? if its the dof its not evenly blurred by distance,

looking good as a render, would love to see an animation to figure out what sort of strange stealing-of-lunch-money the bot is doing to this poor defenseless coke can...!

[percydaman]

yes great image but I agree with all the crits. the scratches look more like dents and coupled with the other imperfections, makes it look more like metal then plastic. but the mat itself is awesome and looks like a good metallic looking plastic.

The DOF definitely isn't up to par though. Whether its "correct" or not, it doesn't do the rest of the image justice. And the black graffiti is too clean. The coke can is great but I would smooth out the grainy glossiness though.

Anyways, great work, Im loving it.