474 Edge of Woods

[glorybound]

Here is a house, for a developer, that I just sent off for comments. Like usual, I value all the comments here, too.

[OPEN_RANGE]

very very nice. some copper or dull bonderized decorative or profiled ridge/hip caps might be cool. the shingles on the walls and roof are A+ (like everything else). can you share how those were created?

[prateekvishwa]

IMO the small shrubs in front of hedges in 1st view looks fake.. may be because that tone of green doesnt look real. i could be wrong as i dont know what type of greenery you see in your region.. I loved the composition of 2nd image!

[Syclone1]

IMO the small shrubs in front of hedges in 1st view looks fake.. may be because that tone of green doesnt look real. i could be wrong as i dont know what type of greenery you see in your region.. I loved the composition of 2nd image!

I agree with the above as well as there seems to be a lot of green color cast bouncing from your grass to the underside of the soffits, most clients prob wouldn't pick up on that though. awesome work as usual!

[andybot_cg]

Nice! I do like that 2nd composition as well. One crit I have is that the building corners and roof ridges are too sharp, this particularly stands out to me in the 1st image. Edit: oops, I was looking originally on my phone. Now seeing the mage full size I see you do have geometry there, it was just the angle of the view that made it look sharper.

[Syclone1]

One more thing my eyes keep getting pulled to is the second render and far left window shows what looks like exterior wall siding inside the house.

[Nicinus]

You really have a 'look' to your exterior images. Very dreamy. Only feedback would be the left side chimney on the second picture, which looks out of scale and style, almost photoshopped on. I also find the pool water a bit to 'radiant'.

[garth100]

Looks really nice man!

[OPEN_RANGE]

You really have a 'look' to your exterior images. Very dreamy. Only feedback would be the left side chimney on the second picture, which looks out of scale and style, almost photoshopped on. I also find the pool water a bit to 'radiant'.

like "vintage"

[glorybound]

You really have a 'look' to your exterior images. Very dreamy. Only feedback would be the left side chimney on the second picture, which looks out of scale and style, almost photoshopped on. I also find the pool water a bit to 'radiant'.

Yes, I changed that chimney material. It is a brick now.

[glorybound]

Is vintage good . Maybe I'll do a square crop

[glorybound]

Some updates

[garth100]

Glorybound, the shadows look a bit too sharp though. That could just be me liking the shadows to look a bit softer. However, the scenes looking really good!

[Syclone1]

I kind of agree about the hard shadows but the over all image seems much darker in look and fee than your usual work, almost feels like there is a nasty storm coming esp in the middle one.

[mitviz]

very nice work! love how you handle vegetation in most of your work