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  • A simple exterior

    Just finished this one. C&C welcome.


  • #2
    great work man! cant really find anything to crit.
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    • #3
      ok maybe one thing. Those flowers look a tad large. not sure what kind they are, but unless they were rose bushes, I would have made them a little smaller.
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      • #4
        Nice Rendering!!!
        the metal roof needs a little bit of blurry ref.
        it would be much better if you have a little bit fog (background) to create sense of depth.
        show me the money!!

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        • #5
          Very nice! The contrast level is just right on my monitor.

          Where did you get the trees? They look good.

          Tony

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          • #6
            Where did you get the trees? They look good.Tony
            The trees are old goodies http://www.realworldimagery.com/

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            • #7
              Very good light and very good texture.

              BTW is the asphalt a photo texture or a procedural texture?

              Thanx

              Fabrizio

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              • #8
                Yea, fantastic job!
                Tim Nelson
                timnelson3d.com

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                • #9
                  haha...very...uhm...american.
                  Marc Lorenz
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                  • #10
                    Very clean! great work paraganek, is the flag a photo or ? if it is geometry it really looks perfect.
                    Eric Boer
                    Dev

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                    • #11
                      hmmm...$10 says its a photo.
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                      • #12
                        Is that flag a composite? I think it looks great and no crits. Just for an alternative I would try a little DOF between the focus and the bg- start where the car is. Wonder how that would look as well.
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                        • #13
                          Thanks everybody !

                          fabrizio: the asphalt is a texture map (bitmap) and there is also a "smoke trail" - lofted object (noise with transparency) floating slightly above the road.

                          plastic: yes, american.....they just like flags here I guess

                          rerendr: good guess, the flag is a photo cutout added in post

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                          • #14
                            great work paraganek,
                            it brings me back to my time in Portland Or.
                            Tom
                            Accept that some days you are the pigeon, and some days you are the statue.

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                            • #15
                              I lived in Oregon until I graduated from highschool. Beautiful place.
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