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    My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

    hi everyone, i've made an exterior rendering of a residential house that i would like you guys to check out, i really need some suggestions to improve it so please guys if you know anything to help me make it better, leave your comments and critics.... I also dont know how to upload pictures to this forum yet, so i'm still trying to figure that out.. meanwhile here is a link to my blog where i posted the image. THANK YOU IN ADVANCE FOR YOUR HELP..

    http://tarstudio.blogspot.com/
    If you have no critics you'll likely have no success.

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    Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

    Originally posted by Newgate
    hi everyone, i've made an exterior rendering of a residential house that i would like you guys to check out, i really need some suggestions to improve it so please guys if you know anything to help me make it better, leave your comments and critics.... I also dont know how to upload pictures to this forum yet, so i'm still trying to figure that out.. meanwhile here is a link to my blog where i posted the image. THANK YOU IN ADVANCE FOR YOUR HELP..

    http://tarstudio.blogspot.com/
    Link is broken?

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    • #3
      Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

      sorry about that, i had to change the blogg name also, here is the new link hopefully it works, Thanks on the notice.

      http://tony101studio.blogspot.com/
      If you have no critics you'll likely have no success.

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        Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

        http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-_Ca5cdWqbh...use+Render.jpg


        thats the link to the image itself, thanks
        If you have no critics you'll likely have no success.

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        • #5
          Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

          lovely render, love the mood and materials, great job! what version was this done in?

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            Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

            thanks shaw, i used vray 1.49.01 for this render
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            • #7
              Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

              great render to rookie in vray but you have problem in glass windows I think made Ref in photoshop but your mood is wonderful I liked and your choosing to color was good going on hero

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              • #8
                Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

                try to use HDRI you will got good results ;D

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                  Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

                  thanks jamaliutlo, i'll render the scene by applyin hdri to it and see how it comes out,
                  If you have no critics you'll likely have no success.

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                  • #10
                    Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

                    Hi Newgate

                    Great work!

                    In my opinion, (if it was my ) I believe if you manage to obtain one sky image a little less uniform, the work will leave more valued, gaining dramatism and depth

                    I liked it... thanks for sharing!

                    Cumprimentos!

                    Castro
                    Intel(R) Core(TM) i7 975 Extreme Edit. 3.33GHz / 6.4GT/s 8Mb box / Motherboard Gigabyte GA-EX58-UDS / Asus GForce GTX275HDMI 896DD3 (12Gb) / Windows 7- 64bit / Sketchup 2013 / V-Ray

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                    • #11
                      Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

                      thanks Acastro
                      i think a good background image would definetly improve it
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                      • #12
                        Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

                        Overall it is very good. Great job.

                        The texture on the ground planes (driveway, sidewalk) look too tiled. The angled railings are unsettling to me, the posts would be better vertical I think. Maybe add a couple walking to the front door...(as they just got back and are closing the garage door).
                        - Nathan<br />www.focpt.com<br /><br />SU8, VRay 1.49

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                        • #13
                          Re: My first render! PLEASE HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER...

                          Hi Newgate and hi all (my first post on forum )

                          Nice render, nice colors
                          What color mapping do you use ?
                          Could you share visopt settings ?

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                          Regards
                          Martin

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