My Firts Post Render

[ramdelgp]

Critics PLEASE…thanx

Special thanks to andeciuala for the amazin interior tutorial, and to arqestevez1 for the amazing tutorial too
thank you guys. im learnin’

[arqestevez1]

Re: My Firts Post Render

hi ramdelgp
it’s looking good for a firs render.
what hapened there with those lights hehe.
your wood looks great

[ramdelgp]

Re: My Firts Post Render

@arqestevez1

hi ramdelgp
it’s looking good for a firs render.
what hapened there with those lights hehe.
your wood looks great

hahahahaha i got to improve more the lighting, thanx men

[ramdelgp]

Re: My Firts Post Render

BETTER?

[deanfitton]

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i think your back ground image is not positioned right, seems too high. I think in those tutorials by andeciuala he speaks about using the guide tool to position the horizon properly.

Just my thought… keep up the good work

[arqestevez1]

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well, yeah, of course there’s a lot to improve, but this is looking much better with more ilumination. still i think you need to improve some of the lamps, i don’t know what you did there, but some of them are turned off

[ramdelgp]

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@deanfitton

i think your back ground image is not positioned right, seems too high. I think in those tutorials by andeciuala he speaks about using the guide tool to position the horizon properly.

Just my thought… keep up the good work

You are right but i put the background in photoshop soo i didn’t have the vanish point to put the image right but thank for the comment

[ramdelgp]

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@arqestevez1

well, yeah, of course there’s a lot to improve, but this is looking much better with more ilumination. still i think you need to improve some of the lamps, i don’t know what you did there, but some of them are turned off

Thank men, any advises? those its turne off because it will hace a lot of ilumination

[fpedrogo]

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Are you using emissive material to produce the illumination or you are using a real light source (rectangular light, spotlight, omni light or IES) ? I ask you, because I can see some light leaking and splotchiness on the wall. If you are using emissive material, try to reduce the intensity of the material and support the illumination with one of the light types that I mentioned.

Best

[ramdelgp]

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@fpedrogo

Are you using emissive material to produce the illumination or you are using a real light source (rectangular light, spotlight, omni light or IES) ? I ask you, because I can see some light leaking and splotchiness on the wall. If you are using emissive material, try to reduce the intensity of the material and support the illumination with one of the light types that I mentioned.

Best

Yes im using rectangular ligths

[ramdelgp]

Re: My Firts Post Render

Another view

[Skif]

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Really nice.
Few things:
1. Background still looks a bit unreal. I would play with gamma in photoshop for a few more minutes. With room so bright (on a second picture) mountains should be overexposed.
2. Light fixtures are obviously unfinished.
3. These two windows on the right wall have very chip glass in them
4. Coffee table legs don’t look like metal for some reason. Try using chrome.

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Also on the right side you have this chest of drawers (picture 2) and some of them are open, bottom right drawer seem to have handle way too high, usually it’s at least 2 or 3" from the top of the drawer front (for this specific handle kind). But to be honest I would just close all these drawers coz instead of adding depth they are adding mess. But that’s just me.

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[ramdelgp]

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@Skif

Really nice.
Few things:
1. Background still looks a bit unreal. I would play with gamma in photoshop for a few more minutes. With room so bright (on a second picture) mountains should be overexposed.
2. Light fixtures are obviously unfinished.
3. These two windows on the right wall have very chip glass in them
4. Coffee table legs don’t look like metal for some reason. Try using chrome.

----
Also on the right side you have this chest of drawers (picture 2) and some of them are open, bottom right drawer seem to have handle way too high, usually it’s at least 2 or 3" from the top of the drawer front (for this specific handle kind). But to be honest I would just close all these drawers coz instead of adding depth they are adding mess. But that’s just me.

THANX MEN, BUT I DONT UNDERSTAND THE LAST PART :S

[Skif]

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@ramdelgp

@Skif

Really nice.
Few things:
1. Background still looks a bit unreal. I would play with gamma in photoshop for a few more minutes. With room so bright (on a second picture) mountains should be overexposed.
2. Light fixtures are obviously unfinished.
3. These two windows on the right wall have very chip glass in them
4. Coffee table legs don’t look like metal for some reason. Try using chrome.

----
Also on the right side you have this chest of drawers (picture 2) and some of them are open, bottom right drawer seem to have handle way too high, usually it’s at least 2 or 3" from the top of the drawer front (for this specific handle kind). But to be honest I would just close all these drawers coz instead of adding depth they are adding mess. But that’s just me.

THANX MEN, BUT I DONT UNDERSTAND THE LAST PART :S

basically handle should be lower.

[ramdelgp]

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@Skif

@ramdelgp

@Skif

Really nice.
Few things:
1. Background still looks a bit unreal. I would play with gamma in photoshop for a few more minutes. With room so bright (on a second picture) mountains should be overexposed.
2. Light fixtures are obviously unfinished.
3. These two windows on the right wall have very chip glass in them
4. Coffee table legs don’t look like metal for some reason. Try using chrome.

----
Also on the right side you have this chest of drawers (picture 2) and some of them are open, bottom right drawer seem to have handle way too high, usually it’s at least 2 or 3" from the top of the drawer front (for this specific handle kind). But to be honest I would just close all these drawers coz instead of adding depth they are adding mess. But that’s just me.

THANX MEN, BUT I DONT UNDERSTAND THE LAST PART :S

basically handle should be lower.

Ooohhh all right ill fix that thanx men

[blitzer_26]

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@ramdelgp

@Skif

Really nice.
Few things:…
some reason. Try using chrome.

----
Also on the right side you have this chest of drawers (picture 2) and some of them are open, bottom right drawer seem to have handle way too high, usually it’s at least 2 or 3" from the top of the drawer front (for this specific handle kind). But to be honest I would just close all these drawers coz instead of adding depth they are adding mess. But that’s just me.

THANX MEN, BUT I DONT UNDERSTAND THE LAST PART :S

Also in the last render, you have the same issue i did with ‘splotch light reflections’… see http://forum.asgvis.com/index.php?topic=9699.0 about half way down the page, fixed up my splotches real quick, however it DOES add significant time to renders
;D