Hi Guy’s and Girls
Been looking at this image to much now and have become snow blind to it, so i would like some constructive comments on improving it.
Im going to change the tree’s for one’s that are more summery.
Thanks.. 
I think it looks pretty strong. But if you’re looking for C&C…
The main thing that strikes me is that maybe the portions of the building in the shade on the left might want to be a bit darker, making things a bit higher contrast. But that may be an exposure preference.
Also on the left side, I either want to see the building without the tree, or see more of the tree. Or maybe it should be cropped differently on the left.
And as nice as the pavement is, maybe you should crop it down a bit. It seems to make the building set back too far, which de-emphasizes the facade.
Cheers.
Hi! Great realism in ligthing and textures!
Maybe a closer camera view would make a it bit more interesting. But then you could loose some context…?
I would try to move those parasols a bit to the right, will explain the arched rooftop better I think.
Think your client will be very happy with the current result anayway!
This could be perfect if:
- the sky was not overexposed
- the reflections were not so hard and linear
- the trees were as realistic as the building
- the furniture on the balconies and the terrace were not placed that symmetrical
Great comments Guy’s …thank you. Just what i needed.
Its really good mate!!
Hard to find something to crit on…
That tree on the right… the bark texture up the middle looks wrong… like its shiny metal… then abit of normal bark then more shiny metal…etc..etc.
Those lower appartments are empty… and look odd…hard to tell unless you zoom in… maybe try an full them up or something similar to that effect??
The ground need something else i think, to big of an open bricked area… does seem right.. cars just part anywhere they want??
Great work tho… really like it.
Just one thing.. i dont know if is your design, but in the bottom of the building the lower part were the floor ends maybe you need some kind of slab.. its hard to start directly with briks from the floar..
Looks pretty good. Great plants - not sure if the tree on the left is experiencing some alpha issues around the leaves but no big deal. I would make the whites whiter and some of the shadows a little light hint of blue.
Hi dude,
well, great lighting, and you told me you didn’t like exteriors
I’m gonna be picky :
* Too symmetrical furniture, i’m sure you have some more to break repetition
* Repetitive plants, don’t konw if anyone want the same plants as the ones in the courtyard
* car seemed parked anywhere
* maybe too strong reflections, wouldn’t a light inside with 4 simples wall do the job ? I mean help breaking the full reflection.
*Tree on the left a little blurred ?
*First balcony on the left is strange, but that’s not the question here
*Some more details/organisation on the ground would help also break the continuity of the pavement, even if it’s great like that, though a little tiling
*Put some dogs running ? :lol: or a towel on a balcony :lol:
Near perfect lighting
Congratulations
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Yep very good lighting!
I agree for the details, a bit of anarchy could be better
nothing else to say exept the bad tree but you already know that :roll:
looking good, maybe it is missing a bit of contrast, looks a little washed out and painterly.
Tilt the shades…they look a little too uniform.
Awesome image though.
Seem to be repeating myself today 
.. some open doors and windows might help help a bit. very nice lightning.
Hope it helps
Peter
Looks good.
I think this image needs some foreground elements - either shadows, peoples or trees…, etc. , just anything that can make the living environment livable, and balance the wide, empty and bright ground. In addition, the contrast is a bit too hard - I mean, the image lacks mid-range tone (this problem has something to do with the first one).
Definitely a big tree shadow in front…could tie in the left tree.
Looking good Natty.
I would crop it in to have more of the interesting part of the building filling the page.
If this isn’t an option then as mentioned, big tree shadow to mellow the foreground and move the eye into the scene.
Also, replace the trees with photos.
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