critique and comments pls
I’d say some of the cars are a bit too shiny, but other than that, Marvelous!
the first image is great!
the others i m not so keen on their angle views…
really nice… i d just burn them a notch or too to make them more “vibrant” imo
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hi pengo, great reality you make there,
1 thing though, maybe i am wrong, but i persume the horizon will be at much lower than what you shown in the first image, well at least that is my calculation.. other than that,
fantastic reality you have there. ![]()
blue line : your horizon
red line,horizon, i think where it’s supposed to be ![]()
U r absolutely right about perspective dominiquelaksmana but the line is not proper the orizon but the top border of one of the cylinder for the plants (a bug problem I think it is, i found when i do tho cylinders one inside another with alpha maps in opacity channels)
ANyway I have to say my horizon in scene should be not so high as u drawn in your image and the plants are on the plane so have to be not so wrong
Happy proper u found it realistic because your works are really good u are one of the reference i look always your nice images
thanks
aaaaaah i see…
now i get it, forgive me for taking that line as horizon ![]()
no problem u noticed rapidly the artifact I got
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I think with a bit of photoshop you could quite easily turn that artifact into a nice cloud.
Very nice sunny images Pengo, but agree with Amer about the cars.
Thanks mcvltd I’ll correct them
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can’t see your image pengo there’s a red x
i would skeeze in some more contrast…its a bit whased out imo
also the brick walls would work out better if displaced and the hedge end on the right is not displaced?
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real nice pengo! ![]()
Exterior ~ cars
I have not seen nicer cars. What library?
About cars models are from dosch 3d libraries (dosch 3dcars libb) exactly ford ka, seat arosa, and passat, and the other from various like 3d02 collection
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I for one think the images are really nice.
Four comments.
1. Look at the front right hedge on the latest embed image post, looks like there is a green plane on end.
2. Same area - is that concrete wall under the fencing suppose to be like that or is the uvw mapping incorrect…? Its like the formwork was a wood fence… Just looks off.
3. The grass looks a bit funky.
4. There is a distinct line runny between the drive and the parking spaces, mapping size doesnt look the same between the two.
The brick displacement is PERFECT… I think the vegetation, cars and people look great too.
Overall, I really like the images… just need a few tweeks.
Arkitec
Very nice work! Love the cars