Shannon Homes Design

[glorybound]

Here are a couple homes I just sent off for review.

[troyhome]

Amazing as always!

[glorybound]

Thanks, Troy! On the 1st one, I was getting 0 reflections in my glass, so the curtains helped; I don't usually do curtains. One the second one, the white fence sticks out too much, so it might go away.

[troyhome]

Reflections are tricky for me
Yeah now that you say it, the white fence really stands out. Maybe it becomes more subtle rather than goes away completely? I'll be curious to see what works out.
I usually like to see a bit more front door but i know how it's a dance between things like that and other aspects of composition. Anyway, I'm always inspired by your work.

[glorybound]

Here is an update to the white one.

[flino2004]

it looks very CGI to me

[troyhome]

Here is an update to the white one.

Oh I like what you did with the fence! And the front door! Bravo

[glorybound]

it looks very CGI to me

I do agree. What would you suggest?

[glorybound]

Here is an update to the white one.

My PSD Manager failed to save a PSD file, so I couldn’t finish my grass. It’s been approved, but I’ll finish it up when I have a moment.

[flino2004]

I would change the trees on the back, they are very tall and the green needs more variation.... the house feels oppressed by the environment like you are going to be in shadows most of the time.... I would show a little bit more asphalt.

[glorybound]

I took some of all your advice and some feedback from the client.

[flino2004]

it seems dark to me.

[glorybound]

I flattened it out, but my client won't like the brick not being white.

[flino2004]

in your renderings, the brick has a little bit of yellow tint. the one I posted the brick looks white.

[glorybound]

I see. I didn't realize you did some corrections. Yes, my went yellow, so I'll have to fix that.