Commercial exteriors

[deflix]

Hi all!,

This is my first post here and am looking for general C+C.
Sadly commercial work but I dont see many exteriors so here's 3 from recent projects. Short ETA's and my own photography limit perfectionism.
All planning app's.

Must add that i've been V impressed by the work here since i joined.
Humbling and informative.

cheers


http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y98/3dman/5cfe979a.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y98...correctedB.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y98/3dman/VIEW_07c.jpg

[percydaman]

nice job. the watermark is very distracting though.

[armilla]

Nice images - very clean and crisp. The high contrast adds a sense of drama, but it might be slightly too much, resulting in the images being a bit on the dark side. In terms of the photomontage, they're really well comped.

Have to agree with percy though - that watermark is a bit over the top, but I guess I can understand your caution.

[deflix]

Sorry for that

Forgot to update for this forum - so here are new links to non-watermarked images. They're small so its cool.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y98/3dman/VIEW_02.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y98...correctedB.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y98/3dman/VIEW_07c.jpg

[s0real]

very nice.
no crits here.

[room217]

I agree, excellent cam match. You really nailed the lighting and camera.

Keep posting!

btw you can have the images show in the forum by using the [img]url here[/img] tags.

[deflix]

thanks for the comments so far.

For additional interest here's progress,.. i use toon for preliminaries of a model - and then material diffusely a 'blocked' in locality. No realviz here - just done by hand via a site visit and digicam. This way all reflections are true, and you get a bit of coloured bounce which is true too.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y98/3dman/sketch.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y98...sketch-col.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y98...develop_01.jpg

[archcanvas]

My eyes feel very pleased looking at these images. VERY WELL DONE!
For the second one, the shadows areas maybe slightly too dark in my opionion.

[jacksc02]

the third image, the perspective lines are off, other than that fantastic!

[shelsby]

hi 3d man

really impressive stuff, can't really fault them at all, modelling, matching and lighting all excellent.

The only thing I spotted was on the 3rd image where the reflection in the glass didn't match the vehicle parked adjacent to it!

Were they all from London? View three looks familiar, where was that?

Keep up the good work

Cheers

Steve

[jow]

very nice,your comping is spot on

[TRGraphics]

Very nicely done! No critics from me.

Tony

[tricky]

Is it me, or was this post origninally back in April, and there are comments only just coming through?

[jow]

Oh yeah!! better late than never

[panthon]

Some threads just strike back when u are not looking