Industrial Interior

[shelsby]

Hi,

These are some test renders from an animation I'm putting together, I would appreciate any C & C's before I start the final render.

Thanks

Steve

[jhiler]

really good images. I really like the look of the office.

Only comment I have is that the towel is a little too large. It looks like that is a bath towel you wouldn't really need something that large if the sink is mostly there for washing hands and maybe some cleaning. Also the towel ring is more residential than industrial.

[ene.xis]

i think u could use some camera correction...
good work nevertheless...

[priad]

Great natural lighting!!!!
Very good job there congrats!!!!!!!!!!
Any chance you post the animation?

[mmikee]

The lighting in those offices is very natural...good job.

[cristoforo]

Looking great.......I agree with the camera correction....if these were stills. But...since they are part of an animation can camera correction even be used??

[Arkitec]

I think the images look great.

CC: I think the ceiling grid looks to big. I also think you need to add a rubber base at the bottom of the walls on the interior shots.

Arkitec

[ene.xis]

...must confess i didn t read the post.....
animation, huh?
well u can use cc...but i think its pointless...
...again ...it s a gr4eat piece...lighting is very good!

[shelsby]

thanks for all your comments, much appreciated. its hard make something like this interesting, but i've tried to get the lighting as good as possible to detract from the dull subject.....and of course I will post the animation.

Thanks

Steve

[shelsby]

here is the first section of the animation for comment

thanks

steve

Click here to watch ind-interior-first-cut