office interior

[stephan_MA]

my first interior for a long time..

c&c please





regards

Stephan

[ene.xis]

2nd image is amazing!
ur lighting solution is great!
i love it!

[re:FORM]

comments : Really nice lighting!

Crits :
Floor map scaling looks too large. (boards should be longer and thinner) ?
Computers and phones need more specular highlights. Your losing all the detail in the black phones.
The plant is obscuring the bottom drawer in the first image...

apart from that... its all looking sweet as.

oh, and I've heard of wireless offices... but I think that's taking the concept a bit far

[ene.xis]

ok!
i must say i love ur light...but now takin another look...

well....it s too empty...lose those fruit bawls, they suck bigtime! phones are dreadfull and yeah....u need glossys and some reflection on those things like laptop, the chairs look flat and greyesh(?) and the floor could be a tad more reflective...
sory about that...but u should level these pretty easy!

[stephan_MA]

the thing is:

i have no direkt light in the scene except for the sun..

so speculars are a problem..

stephan

[ene.xis]

?
you do have white wals, right?

[stephan_MA]

yeah, but then all specular have to be real speculars. not fake ones

stephan

[ene.xis]

well...yeah....but this doesn t seem to me as a complex scene, neither i think ur animating this, so....i think the extra render time will be well worth it....

[jacksc02]

nice work, i agree about the lack of specular highlights. You seem to have some smoothing issues on th arms of the chairs

[stephan_MA]

update..

played with the leather and the plastic..

[cristoforo]

leather looks much better. The floor has lost glossiness, though.....looks too flat now. The table also seems to want more glossiness.