33 Apt. Building

[rmejia]

This is my first image upload here, and what I consider to be my 1st "presentation" render, my previous renders were for design purposes mainly. I am still coming to grips with VRay and establishing a standard workflow. Hope it is not too bad.

Comments and crits most welcome.

[dellis]

Great job...good first post. My only hang ups are the brown balconies and the colour of the beach...other then that its cool.

[rmejia]

Thanks Dwayne. The beach color was something I changed at the end but looking at pictures I have of that area the beach is still lighter in color. The brown balconies you mean the solid area of the railings?

[dellis]

Yeah....it looks as though all those balconies have something hanging over them. Might look better similar to the others.

[dominiquelaksmana]

hi,
looks great,
suggestion : imho, make the beach towards bright beige, almost white,
lighten the road's asphalt, then, lower the saturation of the
plants and grass... i think the rest is great. cheers!

[rmejia]

Thanks for the comments Dominique, I have to say I agree with you on all of them

[dominiquelaksmana]

don't mention it,