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  • Small Montage

    A local orchard need this one real quick like. We did about 10 different scanrios, but here is the one they chose.... Comment appreciated.

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    Eric Camper
    Studio 3D
    www.dbfinc.com/studio3d

  • #2
    The perspective looks great, just too much light on the sides, I'd probably add some boxes or something to block some of the environment light from hitting directly, also what color is you ground matte? A dark grey would probably work better.
    Eric Boer
    Dev

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    • #3
      i think you just need to work on the lighting, and some post 'color correction'
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      • #4
        Needs a little less saturation and maybe a bit more contrast between the shaded/non-shaded parts. The direct shadow on the wall of the existing building (under the canopy) looks like it shouldn't be there as well since the sun doesn't really hit that side. I also don't think the wood post on the far left would be getting any direct sun which they appear to be.
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        • #5
          The perspective is pretty good but the lighting is a tad off. Maybe some brighter shadows could do the trick, and perhaps a darker wood material?

          Good work!
          Dusan Bosnjak
          http://www.dusanbosnjak.com/

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