concept store 2

[priad]

Here the second part of the concept store posted before,
C&C welcome.

[Pixelab]

Gorgeous floor and gorgeous girls

Nice one. Maybe you can color balance the 2 girls on the left, one is too yellow and another is too green (slightly)

[pailhead]

The rendering is great. The girls at the counter integrate seamlessly while the one on the right looks odd, removing her completely wouldn't harm the image. What i find really interesting is the amount of detail in your background, what exactly is seen through the glass, is it all modeled?

[DaForce]

VERY nice

Yeah the girl on the right is too dark and a tad too small me thinks

[priad]

Thanks, glad you love the girls eheheh, I have spend hours to found them, if you see well you can see a guy who watches the girls bihind the glass .
I'm not very happy too with the color matching for them.
the right side girl hide a bad thing, that's why IMO she's too much.

pailhead: the background is mixed: plane + mapping and modeling like the ceiling and some little detail to made it better.

[Jonferimonic]

Girl on the right looks like shes just filled her bag with shoes and is trying to sneak out. I dont trust chicks who wear sunnies while shopping!

[priad]

The clients had an anxious attack when seen this haha , and I'll repost the finish soon.
You are totaly right!