Restaurant

[Resolution01]

Hi

What do you think of these images of a courtyard restaurant.





Cheers
Renato

[joconnell]

The red leaves look a little too dark or intense, maybe some specular will wash them out a bit? Really nice quality of light though - especially the left hand side of the second image.

[nvanherpt]

i would change the pots and plants on the tables. and pump a little more inviting light into the shaded areas.

[Jonferimonic]

Really good! First image table mapping appears to be out? The climbing plant is pretty cool. The greens and reds in your plants/tree need toning down a bit.

[DrJan]

The lighting looks good, and I love the ivy on the right. Good quality.

I'd look into the size of the bricks on the wall and the boxes where the trees are standing in. They seem a bit large.
Also, the tables and chairs are alligned too perfectly in my opinion. I understand that it's all supposed to look new, but I'd rotate some of them to create a more "used" look.

[Resolution01]

Updated images:





Thanks for the comments.

I added some specular highlights to the leaves which has softened them and added some lighting under the eaves. DrJan i see what you are saying in regards to the bricks scale on the planters, I checked the mapping and it is correct but does not look right so i made is smaller which looks better. I also moved the tables around abit to give it that "used" look.

nvanherpt what is wrong with the pot plants?





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[Neilg]

Massive improvement on that update, good work.

The wood youve used looks a little plasticy, I dont know if thats what you were going for but if not i'd get something a bit higher res that didnt tile as much, and add a glossiness/subtle bump map.

Maybe add a bit of specular to your bricks too, just to add some life to the far wall. Other than that, it's pretty good - the lighting is excellent, its just a shame that one of the bits I feel lets it down takes up so much of the image.

[paulison]

nice work, the only thing that stands out for me is still maybe the red plants in the middle.

I guess i would say that maybe they are too saturated?.

Updates and everything else look very nice, well done!

[jacksc02]

nice work there. The light on the left hand side of the image is very distracting