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The red leaves look a little too dark or intense, maybe some specular will wash them out a bit? Really nice quality of light though - especially the left hand side of the second image.
Really good! First image table mapping appears to be out? The climbing plant is pretty cool. The greens and reds in your plants/tree need toning down a bit.
The lighting looks good, and I love the ivy on the right. Good quality.
I'd look into the size of the bricks on the wall and the boxes where the trees are standing in. They seem a bit large.
Also, the tables and chairs are alligned too perfectly in my opinion. I understand that it's all supposed to look new, but I'd rotate some of them to create a more "used" look.
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I added some specular highlights to the leaves which has softened them and added some lighting under the eaves. DrJan i see what you are saying in regards to the bricks scale on the planters, I checked the mapping and it is correct but does not look right so i made is smaller which looks better. I also moved the tables around abit to give it that "used" look.
The wood youve used looks a little plasticy, I dont know if thats what you were going for but if not i'd get something a bit higher res that didnt tile as much, and add a glossiness/subtle bump map.
Maybe add a bit of specular to your bricks too, just to add some life to the far wall. Other than that, it's pretty good - the lighting is excellent, its just a shame that one of the bits I feel lets it down takes up so much of the image.
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