ZZZZZ Church

[glorybound]

Night

The link you posted doesn't seem to work. I agree about the transition of wet to dry. I'll work on that. Thanks for the feedback.

[glorybound]

Night

Forget it, I cut/paste into my address bar and it worked

[DaForce]

Looks ok. However the window reflection looks really wrong.

And the only problem is building is in the dark. And its not all that visible.

I prefer the daylight shots to be honest.

[glorybound]

night

I did a quick photoshop for the windows. It was getting to late last night. I was surprised that wasn't the first thing written. I will work on that. As far as the building being to dark. It is exposed really nicely for me. When I get time I'll do some more work on this one.

[DaForce]

Yeah about the darkness, let me clarify what I meant. It is exposed very nicely for a night shot.. BUT.. as a night shot you cant see the building as much as in a day shot for obvious reasons. Surely the aim of that render is for the client to see the building in all its glory (as boring as it is) and with a night shot is basically hidden in the darkness.

As far as night shots go, thats pretty good!

[Sawyer]

I think it sends a message. but I think its a little strong it almost seems well "culty". I think it needs to be warmer overall I like it that there is a central focus but everything else is so dark and the center is so washed out. I would try it a bit earlier in the night and better lit and a warmer light at the door. And have lights on in the room. This reminds me a bit of a horror movie not a welcoming church. But its well done. I like the sky.

[glorybound]

church

The client already paid for the daylight scene.I am just playing so I can ad to my portfolio. I don't have any night scenes. The clouds are:

http://www.chaosgroup.com/forum/phpB...r=asc&start=25

[SonOfNimrod]

yeah i was gonna say. went from a 'ad' shot, helping to sell the building, to an 'artty' mood shot. the night exposure tho is really good.

[glorybound]

Here is a final update. Not perfect, but I am putting it to rest. Thanks for all the suggestions.

[jophus14]

The newest update looks nice. I love the sketchy look though. Would you tell us how you accomplished that particular look?

[glorybound]

Sketchy

Thanks. I used AKVIS Sketch.... 2 simple step process and very affordable application.

[DaForce]

Yeah the update looks great!!

Trees a little saturated and roads abit too reflective IMO. but worked out well.

Action shot helped alot me thinks

[paulison]

looks good in the end and i also like the atmosphere of the evening image quite a lot