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    Hi all,
    long time no post, and long time no archviz..
    design tooked from "ultimate bathroom" book.
    would love to hear c&c



    best regards

    Jonas
    Jonas

    www.jonas-balzer.de
    www.shack.de

  • #2
    I find the view outside to be very distracting, a bunch of ugly old buildings dominating your image doesn't seem like a good idea.

    Also the inside is too dark....
    I can see your going for a dark look, but the paint colours plus the dark lighting = very dark. On a crt monitor you'd see nothing but the outside.
    WerT
    www.dvstudios.com.au

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    • #3
      in addition to what werticus said, I think the wood blocks holding up the tub look out of place. There's alot I like about the image though. Materials are very well done.
      ____________________________________

      "Sometimes life leaves a hundred dollar bill on your dresser, and you don't realize until later that it's because it fu**ed you."

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      • #4
        I am finding the camera angle feels like everything is falling over to the right

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        • #5
          yep

          yes i agree feels like its tilting to the right, you might want to balance out the camera hor. also i think it would rock so much if you could see some water coming down on the shower! will probably bring back the focus to the scene instead of the outside.
          Ruben Gil
          www.spvisionz.com
          www.linkedin.com/in/s2vgroup

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          • #6
            ok thanks for your comments, will work on it.
            Jonas

            www.jonas-balzer.de
            www.shack.de

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            • #7
              Like pskdude said, some water in the shower would be great. And maybe play with fog to create some steam. Then it could block out some of the outside image and really focus on the bath.

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