Wip on the dead end,

[GoncaloP]

Hi,

This is part of a 3 days project for a dealership on a existing building, any critics are welcome!
I need to finish it today...and a lot of them to render yet



Gonçalo

[percydaman]

some crits? well it looks pretty good anyway..but i guess I could say that as bright as it is outside and darker inside, wouldn't you see more reflection in the panes of glass?

[GoncaloP]

Yeah you right, but main pourpose is to show the inside so I try to avoid that...

Gonçalo

[deano]

Very nice Goncalo!

My 2cents would be to perhaps turn the front ceiling spotlights on, to try get some highlights/sparkle/accent on the cars...it'll maybe brighten the interior just a bit too...pretty strong contast between bright outside/dark inside.

Good job!

[flipside]

I find the outside textures a bit boring because of the obvious repeating. Especially the stones in front of the window, there's a large area with only stones, maybe you can add some extra stuff there (paint lines, dirt, ???)

[RErender]

Very nice, Goncalo, I agree with flipside, maybe a quick way to do it is to mix a little noise into it.

[GoncaloP]

Thanks for the inputs! I agree with them all!

Gonçalo

[percydaman]

the problem with dirtying up an image to make it look more realistic is often not what a client wants to see. They like the idea that their building etc, will be shiny and clean FOREVER!! lol

[GoncaloP]

I will not dirty to much!

Gonçalo

[GoncaloP]

Gonçalo

[R2J2]

really like your work Goncalo, though I reckn' an interior like that should be lit well (twice as much as it is now) like a 7-11 or service station. not blown out but no shadows because of all the light bouncing around. just my thoughts.

[GoncaloP]

Thanks all for the help!



PS: I know, they are all blue

Gonçalo

[Leon_Stoop]

Very nice!
It seems you didn't get any sleep this night

Nice project to do anyway,

greetz,
Leon

[restoeboemi]

does 3 day project including modeling the car???
btw, ur picture looks like Luis Figo. :P
any family relationship?

[thethule]

Looks great Goncalo! My biggest crit would be that the scale of the stones on the floor outside the window looks too small. I would make em bigger personaly. I think they look out of scale with the showroom. Great work mate.

Regards,

Marc