Nice job, a few comments.
- On your dusk shot and overcast shot the glass is not reading very well on the lower restaurant level.
- The tower blocks at the back lack depth.
- Lights on cab could do with improving. They feel very flat.
- Red brick is a little too repetitive.
- Not a big fan of the tree on the lower right. Did you scale it up a lot?. The foliage part also looks very flat especially in the dusk and overcast scene.
- Would have been nice if you had added more detail to the interiors.
- It's all too clean, don't be afraid of dirtying things up a bit. What particularly jumps out at me is the door bottom right on the daylight image. It looks very CG.
- I feel the glazing needs improved. It looks good on the daylight shot but kinda feels dull and flat on the dusk and overcast shot.
- On your dusk shot and overcast shot the glass is not reading very well on the lower restaurant level.
- The tower blocks at the back lack depth.
- Lights on cab could do with improving. They feel very flat.
- Red brick is a little too repetitive.
- Not a big fan of the tree on the lower right. Did you scale it up a lot?. The foliage part also looks very flat especially in the dusk and overcast scene.
- Would have been nice if you had added more detail to the interiors.
- It's all too clean, don't be afraid of dirtying things up a bit. What particularly jumps out at me is the door bottom right on the daylight image. It looks very CG.
- I feel the glazing needs improved. It looks good on the daylight shot but kinda feels dull and flat on the dusk and overcast shot.
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