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  • Private Residence

    i did this house sometime ago, crits and comments welcome.

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  • #2
    Hi, I like the look and feel of the images - especially the house. Some of the vegitation looks a bit hard (not organic), especially the grass, hedge and flowers. The grass looks a bit uniform, some random height/direction and texture/color might look nice.
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/norwiz/
    http://www.fuglefjellet.no/

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    • #3
      Great composition - Grass looks bad and you could add more imperfection in post.
      Maybe add an ambient occlusion pass to get some details. Not sure if it's the best to show that much shadow-side of the residence? I know all clients wants sunny images in my country.

      Overall good work!

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      • #4
        i like.. what library for the planst are you using ?? grass could improve a little...
        Claude
        Originally posted by 3DMK
        do I want to be a rich business man or a poor artist?

        caddworkx

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        • #5
          Thanks guys, I agree the grass needs some work, but the client loved the compostion so i did not fixed the grass.
          Claude the plants are from evermotion.

          Cecil

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