WIP ::Lobby

[natty]

Got to finnish 5 renders by monday ....
here's 2...... all crits welcome.....







Natty

[Brim]

They look great Natty. Nice job on the glossiness in the interior shot. Only thing I would add is some people in the exterior shot. The lobby I like the way it is.

Xavier

[Psy]

I'm really starting to hate you. You always have work, whereas I drown in obscurity.

Other than that, the renders are looking really sweet. Can't wait to see them all.

[shytigercp]

re

Nice job as always...

Finished by Monday....and you started today? Do you work for yourself or for a sweat shop? I've noticed you turn projects around very quickly....nice.

[j.galang]

exterior:

- using a very small amount of area shadow (instead of sharp raytraced shadows) with the sun would be nice
- the inside looks a bit too dark. i know that in reality this might be the case, but believe me when I say clients don't want reality, they want their building to look bright and inviting. so a little less reflection/glass color and some interior fill lights would be nice.

interior:

- you could turn up the samples in hte glossy reflections a bit higher

aside frome these very minor comments the images look great.


shytigercp

btw. 5 renderings by monday when 2 are already done is not unheard of. you just have to work through the weekend a bit. had a LOT of those rush things lately. maybe thats why i'm so touchy.

[shytigercp]

re

J-Galang:

Maybe I'm just warped because all I really do are oversized projects, arenas gov instutions,schools, and your occasional stadium. Hardly ever do I get to do interiors....plus it's hard to get things done swiftly when you have 3 architects on you shoulders, each w/ their own idea of the design.

[raptor]

good job they look good

[deano]

Loking very nice - Congrats!

[TRGraphics]

Very nicw pieces!

I really like the slight blue tint you have to your outdoor shadows, very realistic!

[minimum]

hey Natty
nice images...

I got one suggestion for the exterior rendering:

add an environment map (perhaps an avenue, street or simply another building) for the reflection on the glass at the entrance
this may help in two ways:

give it a more realistic look and take advantage of the elements in the reflection (people, cars, trees)

and also may distract a little bit the eye from the details in the interior so you won't need to create a highly detailed model.

thanks!

[natty]

thanks for all your comments guys ....much apriciated