DASSAULT-BREGUET SUPER ETENDARD

[tucano]

Hi peolpe this is the Dassault-Breguet Super Etendard ARMADA ARGENTINA carrying the feared AM-39 exocet in the falkland War.
comments please.

VRAY core 1.49.73 for Rhino render time 0h 31m 6.8s
Modeled in Rhinoceros3.0 SR5b

[Paraglobal]

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Ol? Tucano

Adorei, est? demais



um abra?o
Sergio

[Micha_cg]

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Nice model. Rendering is not perfect, but quite good.

My suggestions:
- The image is a little bit to dark and contrastful. Maybe you don't use gamma 2.2 output and corrected textures.
- the reflections are very strong and perfect clean - like a new mini model with fresh clear finish
- ground texture looks at some parts like motion blurred and other parts not
- Should it be a model shot or a real scale one? The DOF make it looking like a model. Also, I would not set the focus at the tail.
- And let more image space at the head, so the airplane can better move forward without to leave the image.

[tucano]

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sauda??es Sergio!
Thanks Micha, I worked in those details. The model not this in scale, maybe that is a problem, I corrected that right now!

[kinetic2]

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I don't think this comment is appropriate (destroyer of british ships )

[magnatizerr]

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Totally agree with MarkO - not the best method of getting people to help?!

[Micha_cg]

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I thought it mean destroyer based on a british ship. I prefer civil scenes.

[tucano]

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Edit post, without encourage to offend

[kinetic2]

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Tucano, thank for the amendment to your post. You must be an aircraft enthusiast as your log on name is that of a training aircraft and your model is very detailed right down to the (3-A-202), do you have the La Lora on the left hand side of the cockpit with two ships in front of it.
Thanks again for the amendment
MarkO

[tucano]

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Hi Mark0, this is the 3-A-204 I do not have good photos of the 3-A-202 with two ships next La Lora, this jet plane in particularly attack the Atlantic conveyor ship.

[tucano]

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Hi micha, I am not sure as to do this, you can explain it:

- The image is a little bit to dark and contrastful. Maybe you don't use gamma 2.2 output and corrected textures.

The model is in real scale now (14m ) and the focus is fuselage moved, as you setting the DOF?

- Should it be a model shot or a real scale one? The DOF make it looking like a model. Also, I would not set the focus at the tail.

[Micha_cg]

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The lighting looks a bit to high contrasted at my screen, so I thought you could used a gamma 1 output only. What did you use?

DOF - mayb it's not the main reason for the small model look. I would use a little less DOF. A more detailed ground and a less perfect reflection could help to get a real scale feeling too. The air plane looks like very glossy plastic now.