kitchen-revised

[stefanq]

same scene, just modify some settings
I think it's better, but I need another opinion
Please coment, thanks!
Stefan

[santos]

Re: kitchen-revised

this is nice ...
just few comments..
1 change your tile to a better material tile above the range
2 be careful with the details (the cabuinet door must be hangging not connected directly to the floor
3 mapping issue at the lower right conter wood..
4 can you change the red window frame ?
5 put some accesories to make it alive..
6 your setting is fine with me..
keep it up post more your getting better and better

cheers jds

[stefanq]

Re: kitchen-revised

Thanks Jeff for your time!
Your comments it's great like always...very constructive.. I already apply some of your methods( about lightning mostly) and I thank you again for all the advices that you provide in this forum.. so important for all of us.

Regards,
Stefan

[migz_cg]

Re: kitchen-revised

oh..there you are, looking great bro..

one thing though, your lav faucet seems oversize?
the floor pattern looks like a granite/marble to me, try adding a little more reflection on it.

lighting is nice..

keep it up bro!

[stefanq]

Re: kitchen-revised

Hi migz, thanks for comment bro!
That floor is great,I will try to do it lighter. It has a "specular map" on it,so the reflection is controlled by that map.
The faucet...hehehe... it's just a stupid chrome thing,just to be there and shine.. I believe I should try to pay more attention to the detail of the scene
(but not that), because things get serious on this site full of very talented
people.But thanks for noticing all the bad things of my render image.
I promise to do better next time. Cheers man!

[aser28]

Re: kitchen-revised

Hey floor material is from my library nice to see someone using my material ...

[stefanq]

Re: kitchen-revised

Nice material aser! Thanks for sharing with us. I have lot's of textures to play with, but you know, when I see something shiny....kidding, I have lot of problem with an wallpaper material, because I didn't know where to put the specular map!But I love those kind of complex materials! Good job!
P.S. does anyone notice that my render is darker, because I am at home now, and my render don't look the same. It seams to me that is way too darker!!
I have to know witch monitor I have to change )

[migz_cg]

Re: kitchen-revised


"...because things get serious on this site full of very talented
people."

heheh..love that line..

[nomeradona_cg]

Re: kitchen-revised

sorry stefanq if this is out of topic. but just want to complement aser for sharing the most vismat on the other thread. good job man. keep it up.

ok as for your kitchen. I like actually the lighting of your scene, the effect of radiosity light (bounced light) is actually good.

some of the things beside jds and migz comments, imho take care in noticing the tiling effect of your texture. one thing you can do is to varry the scale and position of the texture you are using, sometimes duplicating material is one way of doing it. second add some small stuff in the kitchen...

[stefanq]

Re: kitchen-revised

Thanks for comment, nomeradona, you are right about the light...it's only from outside, no additional lights in there.About the other issues... I like to think I'm doing better now, because this is just an old scene, and I only change the settings, no mapping, or modeling..just lightning.
Anyway, I will post soon something else, and I will love to see you comment that one too, and to tell me if it's better or not.
Thanks to all the members of the forum, for the help!

[vidy]

Re: kitchen-revised

hi stefanq,

maybe just the reflection of the under panel cupboard, it seems like it have the same glossines as the top table, i think it has to be a different material right, just make blurrines on under panel cupboard, it'll look better..

Regards,
VD