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  • A start to my "Eye Candy", A.K.A. my senior project

    This is the first of hopefully many images for my senior project (Silvershadow:hope you dont mind me playing with your title ). It has been a project that started last semester with doing research, writing a paper, and obtaining a site for the project. This semester I am designing my last project of my college career...it is a nightclub/ultralounge. This image is of a lot of existing buildings (well pretty much all existing) but my club is the building located far back with the neon martini glass. Im not sure if i am going to keep that as my logo or not, but I just wanted to showcase how the building sits with the rest of the surroundings since there is an exterior patio and beautiful view of the city. This project is an interior design project and will last for the rest of the semester, but I will try to update this with my progress if people are interested? Please let me know what you think guys and critique me as much as you want, cause as much as possible will really help. Hope you like it.



    http://www.flickr.com/photos/2760458...21453/sizes/l/

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    Re: A start to my "Eye Candy", A.K.A. my senior project

    I think that the imagery looks great, just a comment about what the image is focusing on. It seems more like you are telling the story about this plaza and the city, which is what I first thought your project was going to be about. Although it is only one image out of a series, maybe it will flow better when you get some of the other images done. Also your city background looks good.
    - Doweth!

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    • #3
      Re: A start to my "Eye Candy", A.K.A. my senior project

      Hey steelers05,
      Good work on the night scene. i think that applying motion blur to people is a good idea, but when a person standing still he shouldn't be blurred.

      Best of luck on your project!

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      • #4
        Re: A start to my "Eye Candy", A.K.A. my senior project

        ive seen your work sir...i think scaling issue for tour entourage sir..tweak more on the materials,.,and it becomes great..post more
        Technological Institute Of the Philippines<br />BS.Architecture <br />astig mga noypi !!!!!

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        • #5
          Re: A start to my &quot;Eye Candy&quot;, A.K.A. my senior project

          u could improved the scale human image that u used in this image..i think thr Man standing with the phone is to big..is it?
          But i like the night scene background...keep up the good work.

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          • #6
            Re: A start to my &quot;Eye Candy&quot;, A.K.A. my senior project

            hehehe. can borrow it. or name it "I Candy"
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            • #7
              Re: A start to my &quot;Eye Candy&quot;, A.K.A. my senior project

              Thanks for the feedback. And nomer good name suggestion, I just may have to change it But I have to admit that these were all accurate suggestions so I tried to edit the image a little more. Hope it looks a lil better?

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